17 year old Shay Martin has been through alot, she lost her dad in a plane crash, her mom left a year later and she's battlinf cancer. She lives with her elderly grandmother, Shay didnt have time for boys but when she decided to finsh her last year of high school at a pulic school instead of home school she meets carter
jayjay2015Can't wait to read the story! I loved the prolugue!
um, okay. that was really short and didnt have hardly any details if none at all. to me it sounded like you were just listing facts rather then telling a story. if you could fix it, make it longer, and heart felt i would love to check it out again. i think you can do better.=)
(constructive critisms only!!=))
its not the story its wat its going to be about im posting the story later
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