like suffocating

April 11, 2010
By EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
13 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say it's what you make
I say it's up to fate
It's woven in my soul
I need to let you go
Your eyes, they shine so bright
I want to save their light
I can't escape this now
Unless you show me how
When you feel my heat
Look into my eyes
It’s where my demons hide


i hate the feeling of virtigo
the spinning smothering feeling that wont stop.
everything is a memories and memories consist of blood.
I hate the feeling of dreams
the ones you know you cant accomplish
the ones you dont know why you dreamnt in the first place
i hate the feeling of the past
it haunts my sleep and wake
reminding me that i wasnt always this person
I hate the feeling of love
the sticky warmth that hangs in the air after kisses
and melts the world.
Sometimes its like suffocating


The author's comments:
this is me.

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.king. SILVER said...
on Sep. 4 2012 at 5:57 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Favorite Quote:
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"i hate.." All 'I's , that represent 'me' should be Capitalized, especially since it's at the beginning of a sentence. "dont" is "don't" same for "wasnt"; There are some things misspelled, Like "dreamnt" I think you mean "Dreamed".... Well that was just feedback, With all that fixed, It would be Excellent! Your writing was very unique, You just need to review before pending :D

on Aug. 12 2010 at 5:00 pm
music_lover PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
25 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
MY quote: "Without music, life would be absolutely pointless.... Music is my life and it always will be!"

Wow, that's really good. I like the emotions you display in your writing. Good job.




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