English, Period 5

March 15, 2010
By RueD! BRONZE, Omaha, Nebraska
RueD! BRONZE, Omaha, Nebraska
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Steve sat in his English class, bored. The teacher droned on. Steve wished something exciting would happen.

Minutes passed. Suddenly, a series of loud shots rang from outside the classroom followed by screams. The door opened. A boy with a blood-splattered shirt pointed a pistol at Steve, and pulled the trigger.

The clip was empty.

The author's comments:
This is a 55 Fiction story, which means you have to write a story, with characters, setting, plot and ending, in 55 words or less.

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This article has 2 comments.

on May. 8 2010 at 9:27 pm
t0xic_tomato GOLD, Somewhere, Pennsylvania
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I love this. Now I'll have to write a 55-word story.

on Mar. 31 2010 at 8:56 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

This is so well-written, but so frightening! Keep on writing! If you get the chance, may you please comment on my work, too? Thanks so much


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