Best Surprise

March 10, 2010
By wildcat DIAMOND, Hopkinton, Massachusetts
wildcat DIAMOND, Hopkinton, Massachusetts
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Inside the box with the big, red bowwas the best surprise ever. Seeing the box definately rocked my nerves so I opened it slowly and caustiously, building suspense. For i was to happy to see it right away. When i untied the bow, opened the box, and peered inside i saw the most beautiful ring ever. my friend who got it for mejust how sentimental rings are to me, so when i saw it i began to cry in happiness. I was delighted at having the thought that someone understood me so well.


The author's comments:
Rings are more then an accessory, for me they are a story, adventure, or symbolic in some way.

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