I spaced it like that after I realized that it was like a poem...I thought that if it was already so close I'd just go all the way. I think if I were to submit it to a magazine or something that was only fiction I would go back to the original spacing. 

Thanks!

The good:  I liked this - it was fun in that you could see where the character was coming from, commiserate, and marvel at the chip logic, all in about ten seconds.  Great job!

The bad: To make it more like fiction and less like a poem, you could make the part where she said why she liked chips all one paragraph, instead of spacing it like that.  But that's just if you want to - I don't think it needs to be changed. :)

The random: Good job!

First: Thank, again!!!

And second...I have no idea. Probably fiction, because that's what I submitted it under but I really don't know. 

You're welcome...

If this gets published (which it should) do you think they would put it under poetry or fiction?

Okay, I won't count this as the fiction I'm suppose to give a feedback to because it is like a poem just like you said, hahaha. I couldn't resist after clicking on the name and see the length. I had to read it, hahaha.

So so short yet so sweet! Hahaha, I love how profound this is. You were able to capture such emotions. And you were able to give me a new perspective on chips in two short paragraphs!! Hahaha, that is insane :p

I highly recommend you to write a real fiction feature on these two paragraphs! Honestly, I could already see the story flowing through my head, hahaha. Don't worry I won't steal you work :)

If you haven't already sense my tone, I love this :D