February 17, 2010
By Anonymous

As you tell me hurtful words tears slowly fall from my knock me down eveytime... you set a trap and i come fallin deeper and deeper everyday. You told me you where leavin this time and i will never see your face agian. I just stare and wait for more traps... but you walkin out that door was your last and thats when i knew pickin up my heart will be hard. and now since im on my own and doin well you come back. you come back herd but this time I was read! and felt 10 ft taller i was able to free myself from your trap and this time you fell deep and with out looking back... i smile.

The author's comments:
this piece is when someone tells you how much they love you but let you fall and then leave a trap to get you back.(but your stronger than that.)

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Dominicana said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 8:46 pm
I love the story keep on writing


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