Dating Disaster

February 6, 2010
By Sonny555 PLATINUM, Oyster Bay, New York
Sonny555 PLATINUM, Oyster Bay, New York
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Owen called up Lily, his girlfriend who was new to his school. He wanted to ask if she'd like to go out to dinner with him.
"Hello?" asked the voice on the phone.
"Hey Lily, it's Owen," said Owen. "Do you want to go to Giuseppi Giordano's with me?" Giuseppi Giordano's was a fancy Italian restaurant.
"Sure," answered Lily. "I'll see you at six."
Owen thanked Lily and hung up the phone. He got dressed in his black suit and copper tie. He brushed his dirty blonde hair and drove to Giuseppi Giordano's. Once there, he was shocked to see something unplanned: Lily was with her friends.
"Lily!" shouted Owen. "What's going on?"
"Oh hey Owen," said Lily.
"I brought some friends with me."
"I-I thought it was just you and me," said Owen confused.
"No, I never said that," said Lily.
"Well that's it Lily. I'm breaking up with you."
Lily looked astinoshed.
"Don't give me that look. It's your fault."
Owen left the restaurant and the date was screwed.

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on Jul. 11 2011 at 7:59 pm
billgamesh11 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"It's always darkest before the dawn." ~Florence and the Machine

Hey! This article reminds me of my BF Owen! He took me to a Mexican restaurant, but he took his friend with him. I was pissed at first, but since I am only 13 I can not drive away as fast as possible. So I had to sit through the date. But in the end, I was sort of glad he brought him along since it was our first real date and he took some awkwardness away from the date but also added some to it. But great story!!! It would have been better if you had made it longer, but it was still good!!!:)


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