3 Missed text messages

November 25, 2009
By RonCame1993 SILVER, Farmington Hills, Michigan
RonCame1993 SILVER, Farmington Hills, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
If I'm weird, what's normal?
Gullible isn't in the dictionary... (sad face)


my phone vibrates in my
pocket, alerting me to
a missed message.
the first is from my mom,
sent this morning.
each word is spelled out
she has written so much
that her message is cut off.
something about grades and
what is for dinner tonight.

Delete.

the second is from my new
best friend.
i read this text a little
more carefully than the first.
party 2nite! C u there!

Delete.

3rd message recieved.
the number is unfamiliar.
my eyes scan the blue screen.
my face illuminated by the
phone's glow,
expression slowly changing,
tears,
anger,
fear,
then...
nothing.
emptiness fills the void
that had so suddenly
consumed me.
she's gone.
her last words to me, contained
in a message.
I never got to say goodbye
or tell her I loved her.
anger.
no one cared enough to call me,
except for one of her co-workers
who cared enough to text me.
i will do what i couldn't do for her and

Save.

The author's comments:
I wrote this in sort of a text message format except without the abbreviations.

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massizme said...
on Dec. 19 2009 at 11:54 am
massizme, Miami, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm not saying everything is survivable, just that everything but the last thing is."
Quentin Jacobsen, Paper Towns by John Green

no prob. it was great. :)

CLC93 said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 2:03 pm
I know I'm your sister and all but your poem is really good :D!

on Dec. 15 2009 at 2:00 pm
RonCame1993 SILVER, Farmington Hills, Michigan
9 articles 3 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
If I'm weird, what's normal?
Gullible isn't in the dictionary... (sad face)

yeah that's what the last one was about. =) thanks for commenting!

massizme said...
on Dec. 14 2009 at 7:57 pm
massizme, Miami, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm not saying everything is survivable, just that everything but the last thing is."
Quentin Jacobsen, Paper Towns by John Green

i cant believe this hasnt been commented on. wow! the last one was someone telling her that her mom had died, rite? thats so sad!


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