i love him

October 5, 2009
By xmusicxisxmyxlifex BRONZE, Christiana, Pennsylvania
xmusicxisxmyxlifex BRONZE, Christiana, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
giving up doesnt always mean u r weak. sometimes it just means your strong enough to let go


another argument occurs and she tries to make a point. anger builds inside her but her parents she dissapoints. a failure in every way, she just wants to see his face, she can yell, bleed, and scream. but they tell her she can dream. she starves herself during day, and cries for him at night. she'll do anything to see him, she wont stop till the jobs done right. now time is running out, and shes giving it her all. she tries to confront her parents but more arguments to fall. no compromise or anything at all. she says "haven't you noticed? you want to protect me, but dont open your eyes, i never earm and im full of cires, i dream like you said and close my eyes. im afraid to speak and always hide, im a failure and afraid to die. i ask you for help but u push me aside. you want to protect me but im already broken. i try to talk to u but feel so outspoken."
they stared in silence and took it all in, then asked
"why do u love him so much? isnt us just good enough? what about the things we taught? and all the times we fought?"
a trear came to her eyes and she replied: "because hes all i got...."



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on Oct. 22 2009 at 1:46 pm
xmusicxisxmyxlifex BRONZE, Christiana, Pennsylvania
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giving up doesnt always mean u r weak. sometimes it just means your strong enough to let go

thank u, my friend helped me with it and i decided to put it up on here. i have other poems 2 but not many people like them i guess =/

on Oct. 17 2009 at 10:17 am
KiraKira PLATINUM, Cardiff By The Sea, California
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Do not pity the dead, Harry. Pity the living, and above all, pity those who live without love -Albus Dumbledore

I love this! It's almost like a poem, and it flows so well.


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