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September 29, 2009
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Would you rather have pink or blue nail polish? Would you rather be deaf or blind? Would you rather live as a vegetable or die as a hemophiliac? Would you rather wake up not knowing who you are or not wake up at all?
They, the doctors, want me to write. Anything, they said, even a scribble. I don’t remember how to write or to even hold a pencil. My fist clenches around it like a baby, like I had been reborn. These people, probably watching me from the video camera. Laughing. Like I was some sick joke. My face flushes, my eyes water stinging my cheeks, slipping down to drip on the paper. Leaving dark, shriveled, circles, in place of my words.
I cannot begin to describe how it feels when you don’t know yourself anymore. Waking up and recognizing nothing, from the colour of your hair or the dryness of you hands. Falling asleep one night after giving your mother a kiss not knowing the next time you see her you will scream in panic. As if it was all a recorded film that had been rewound, and the play button was stuck. Except for me, the play button wasn’t just stuck. It wasn’t there period.
This woman, my mother so I am told, places a photo next to bed the day after I wake up. After two months. The perfect family. In the background there is a man, smiling, his arm is around a girl. Looks like me. Something else is familiar. Is it his expression? The way his hand grips her shoulder instead of resting on it? Rage. I smash the picture to the floor. The glass shatters. I tear his face from the picture, the rest floats to the ground. The woman cries. The doctor nods. I wonder if I care.
They release me a few weeks later to the woman. She tells me we are going home. He’s gone. He can’t hurt you anymore. Legally I don’t need to go with her. But I do. She tells me about myself. My boyfriend, our pregnancy. I look down at myself wondering how a child had ever been there. Where was it now?
I kept the torn photo of him in my pocket. Obsessed. It took me a month but I found him. Daddy, I look at him wasted. Why did you do it? I remember what you did to me now. But I am not like you.
Would you rather wake up not knowing who you are or not wake up at all? It kills me to see him like this, slumped in his chair, snoring softly, absolutely unaware. A broken glass is on the floor. The red wine will stain the carpet. I will allow my blood to enter the blend. In time they will replace the carpet. Still the stain of his sin and mine shall remain. I look at my cracked reflection in the mirror. One shot. I look at him and pull the trigger. I would rather not wake up at all.

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SilverAngel777 said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 3:00 pm
Oh my god, that's amazing, the raw emotion of it, the intensity, i love it, i even understood it the first time
yelnatz replied...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 7:33 pm
thank you so much!!! thats awesome that you got it the first time round!
SilverAngel777 replied...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 3:51 pm
i loved it so much, how'd you think of this?
yelnatz replied...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 7:58 pm
good question. I think i was reading some sort of article on teen pregnancy or whatnot and then we had to write a short story for school and i chose that. But soon found it was common... so added a twist... :P the writer in me i guess
yelnatz replied...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 8:00 pm
teen pregnancy article. Then i had to do a short story for school and liked the idea, but found it's very common thing for teens to write about so i added a twist... the write in me i guess :P
SilverAngel777 replied...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 4:52 pm
teen pregnancy ? wow
kittycat said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 7:04 pm
amazing iloved it def going to recomed it to some people
yelnatz replied...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 7:34 pm
that would be amazing :) thanks!
babrbestbcb said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 9:04 pm
Omg that was so sad... it was so inspiring and full of emotion! great job!
yelnatz replied...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 9:52 pm
i try :P thanks so much though! I love getting feedback
arrowed_rain said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 1:49 pm
I agree with SadieSalvation. Inspiration! *lightbulb*
You know, those questions really made me think. That is, the whole story made me think. I can understand why this is one of your favorite pieces. I really like it, too.
yelnatz replied...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 3:41 pm
I'm so happy that it's inspiring, that's amazing... i didn't think that :P
That's awesome the effect it had :)
SadieSalvation said...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 7:51 pm
This is absolutely brilliant, one of the best things I've ever read on here, or ever. Keep it up! You inspire me :)
yelnatz replied...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 3:41 pm
thank you so much! that means so much to me :)
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