What I need?

September 21, 2009
“I’m Drake,”

“So?” I raise an eyebrow at the tall brown eyed boy standing over me.

“So, I just thought-well you know,” I smile to myself as he twitches nervously.

“No, I don’t know.” I turn on my heels and head down the long hallway. But it isn’t long before the ‘Drake’ boy catches up to me. “What?” I ask, already getting bored of him.

“I was wondering…” He paused, annoying me more.

“Well? Spit it out already!” I stop and throw my hands up. Why does everyone always bug me?

“If you wanted to be friends,” He stares down at his feet. I look him over and start walking again.

“I don’t need friends,” I state knowing that he won’t give up.

“Well what do you need?” This catches me off guard. Nobody has ever asked me what I nee. So I stop and this time I’m the one looking down and my feet.

“I don’t know,” I whisper.

“That’s okay,” His sweet breath caresses my cheek. I look back up at him, questioning.

“Is it?” A crooked smile plays across his face.

“We’ll find out, together.” Then the strange boy hugged me. And from then on, Drake and I became each others need.

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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 9:04 pm
i think this is really cute & i really like it but the only thing is that it seemed kinda rushed. idk maybe its just me. good job!
soccercrazy said...
Dec. 23, 2009 at 12:23 am
oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh, please please please write a sequel! that was such a ginormous cliffhanger, i'm hanging by my hair here...! i want to keep reading. give me something to keep reading. =]
NeverSayNever replied...
Dec. 26, 2009 at 5:52 pm
I wrote this with a cliff hanger for the reader to fill in the blanks of afterwards, but I might consider writing a sequel or something from years later.
soccercrazy replied...
Dec. 28, 2009 at 12:41 am
please do. i think it would be lovely to see what your take on the situation would bring. =]
KiraKira said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 8:00 pm
This is cute. What happens?
Kc~to~thy~night~I~shall~belong replied...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 3:17 am
Well this was just a really short story of mine, I have started about twenty different dtories, just most are too long to post
kmblue This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 4:44 pm
i really love your fiction peices. please post them! even if they are too long. ill be you dedicated reader! hahah
Maybe`you`do`deserve`a`second`chance... replied...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 10:12 pm
I have posted tons, they just don't get put on, it's kinda sad since i love all the other pieces better
LaylaViolet said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 12:04 pm
Oh, and I like the House of Night series too. I totally have Vampire Fever; and I'm not complaining :D Who's the author of Evermore? I'm really curious.
Kc~to~thy~night~I~shall~belong replied...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 7:35 pm
The author of evermore is I belive to be Allyson Noel, excuse me if I mess up the spelling lol :)
LaylaViolet said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 12:02 pm
I did, in fact, like it. Very much. It was very interesting and kinda made me laugh (is that what you were going for?) Anyhoo, I really like your fiction pieces; poetry's not really my thing. Keep writing; you're really good! :P
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