14 years +

August 18, 2009
By Chiquita SILVER, Stafford, Virginia
Chiquita SILVER, Stafford, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
I dream of being with you forever:) Twilight::


Our love was like no other.
He told me I was different.
holding my hand he stuck with me through what ever.
They say love doesn't last forever.
But i always thought different.
He was my first, and my only.
I trusted him, and gave him my all.
They told me to be safe,
But he said not to worry.
Unknowingly I let him take my innocense.
And for the first time in 14 years, I felt special.
Sometimes being special isn't always good,
And i learned the hard way.
He found something better,
Everything was joke
A lie
A game
HE USED ME!!!
And abandoned me.
Nothing I ever felt could compare to this.
I cried for days and weeks,
I went crazy and blew things out of porportion.
I wanted to end my life for someone who was a waste of time.
I started feeling sick and nauseas,
Then i began to think of the possibilites.
It only took one plus sign to stop my world.
The word spread, and he came back, only to say he had nothing to do with it.
With a child on the way, and only one option in front of me.
I gave him up, and again I was all alone.
I took a life,
And ended mine.

-Juicy Bby

The author's comments:
This piece was inspired by young girls who do come to this very difficult challenge in life, but ending your life is not the solution. Hopefully this poem will inspire people to be safe and to not take things out of proportion.
Get help don't be afraid to speak up.

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on Aug. 29 2009 at 3:35 pm
unearthlyhaphazard GOLD, N/A, New York
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"There are three rules for writing the novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are."~W. Somerset Maugham

Fantastic work. I agree with Tears2Roses; you really did capture the feeling of anger and depression. The last two lines, I think, really send out an important message.

Schubster said...
on Aug. 29 2009 at 3:42 am
you did great choosing the message, and even better executing it. Fantastic Job!!!!:)



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on Aug. 27 2009 at 10:01 pm
RadioShower PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
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Emo is imaginary - Gerard Way
Normalness leads to sadness -Phil Lester (AmazingPhil)

wow! i like you tone you captured the feeling of anger and depression very well!! Keep writing!!!




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