14 years +

August 18, 2009
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Our love was like no other.
He told me I was different.
holding my hand he stuck with me through what ever.
They say love doesn't last forever.
But i always thought different.
He was my first, and my only.
I trusted him, and gave him my all.
They told me to be safe,
But he said not to worry.
Unknowingly I let him take my innocense.
And for the first time in 14 years, I felt special.
Sometimes being special isn't always good,
And i learned the hard way.
He found something better,
Everything was joke
A lie
A game
And abandoned me.
Nothing I ever felt could compare to this.
I cried for days and weeks,
I went crazy and blew things out of porportion.
I wanted to end my life for someone who was a waste of time.
I started feeling sick and nauseas,
Then i began to think of the possibilites.
It only took one plus sign to stop my world.
The word spread, and he came back, only to say he had nothing to do with it.
With a child on the way, and only one option in front of me.
I gave him up, and again I was all alone.
I took a life,
And ended mine.

-Juicy Bby

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unearthlyhaphazard said...
Aug. 29, 2009 at 3:35 pm
Fantastic work. I agree with Tears2Roses; you really did capture the feeling of anger and depression. The last two lines, I think, really send out an important message.
Schubster said...
Aug. 29, 2009 at 3:42 am
you did great choosing the message, and even better executing it. Fantastic Job!!!!:)

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Tears2Roses said...
Aug. 27, 2009 at 10:01 pm
wow! i like you tone you captured the feeling of anger and depression very well!! Keep writing!!!
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