Not finished at all, just want everyones opinion of wther I should carry on.

July 28, 2009
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She stood tall in her Prada Stilettos, her blonde hair sashayed around her prominent waist and her pearly teeth were set in to a harsh smile that quivered at the edges with a knowing intensity. I stared at the stranger before me, peering curiously through the admirable mirror that had been so carefully placed before me.

'Who am I?' I wondered, scrutinizing the girl I had become. I had to search deep, behind the dark tamed lashes, somewhere beneath the harsh eyes and the sloping contours of her scowling face I found her. The girl I had once been. The girl who laughed at silly jokes, the girl who would conquer the whole wide world, the girl who was proud to be Jemimah Phyllis MacLeod.

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distant_dreamer said...
Aug. 9, 2009 at 7:32 pm
I love it please write more!!! You are so talented at writing!! And your not alone I love to read a lot too! 5 stars!
Hope_Princess said...
Aug. 3, 2009 at 10:38 pm
You should definitely carry on, I'm dieing to know what's going to happen. Already I can see that you're very good at describing things.
Joyfulnoise13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2009 at 6:51 pm
Interesting first paragraph. It made me want to read more. I think you should keep going on this one.
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