Ancient Civilizations

January 16, 2009
One time long ago I was a living man. When I lived I was the most feared emperor of all. Although I was the nicest and most forgiving person I was feared greatly. Some may say that I was cruel and would torture people. I would never do that I would offer them their freedom in my kingdom but the ones that refused I let go and then they went out and spread rumors that I was cruel and harsh and that’s what got people turned against me.

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Caesar123 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 5, 2014 at 8:50 pm
Well, it was alright. It’s a fine idea, starting out with a misunderstood monarch, and all, but it obviously needs more development. Put some more thought into it, maybe write up a longer version, and then resubmit it. You never know what might happen!
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