My Trip on September 11, 2001

April 24, 2012
By Alice-Love BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
Alice-Love BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Don't cry because it's over, but smile because it happened


Today I boarded the plane for my fall vacation trip, but the scariest thing had happened. The plane had apparently been high jacked by a bunch of terrorists from some other continent. I don't really know what the heck is wrong with people, but there obviously not very nice. So as of now everyone is freaking out. Nobody knows what's going to happen. But I figured that they were going to kill us all. So I decided to go into the cockpit and kill who ever is in there. I told my family and they were all like "No! Ava, you can't go in there! You'll die!!" "If I don't go in there the least that will happen is that we'll all die, but if I go in there the worst that will happen is that I'll just die," I told them.

So I said good bye and walked up to the place that the pilot drives. (whatever that's called.)I took a deep breath and flung the door open. There was the "take over pilot" (who was really fat, by the way) He pointed a gun at me. But I had punched him in the face before ha could even do any thing. His nose started to bleed and I took the gun from him, though I didn't shoot him yet. why waste this wonderful opportunity beat up this jerk for what he's done? So I punched him in the stomach, kicked him in the shin, and then slapped him across the face about a hundred times. He was just about to kill me with his fists when I had finally shot him in between his legs in that one place you do not want to be shot. He laid there dead and I dropped the gun and walked out of the room. Everyone was staring at me for being such a hero.

Later when we got to our hotel, all you could here about on the news is "Ava Warren, hero of The Twin Towers and a million people" Apparently there was another plane and I had scared it away.

So in conclusion, if you ever try to plan a terrorist attack any where, don't do it because there will be people like me who will stop you and instead of killing a bunch of us, we'll just kill you! I'm strong and free and won't let a bunch of terrorists take over America's lives!


The author's comments:
This is my first published piece. I was inspired to write this when taking notes in history about suicidal bombers and thought of this. I hope you find this entertaining. I'm truly sorry for all the people who have lost loved ones from this horrible terrorist attack :(

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Daesha SILVER said...
on Jul. 2 2012 at 5:17 am
Daesha SILVER, Dalby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Everything happens for a reason

I like it... except, there are a few things that could be better...

This is just my opinion, of course.

The language used didn't seem to really match the topic. I think if the story was longer, then the way she speaks could make more sense.

I get that it was supposed to be funny, and it was, I liked it, but, yeah, the type of language used, and also, maybe in more of your peices you could describe the scene a little better..?

Anyways, this is just my opinion, but I still loved it, you did a good job


on May. 6 2012 at 7:09 pm
Alice-Love BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
1 article 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't cry because it's over, but smile because it happened

thanx for keeping your promise:)

my whole goal was to make it funny but what didnt really flow about it? if you dont mind to take the time to tell me


on Apr. 29 2012 at 6:34 am
Itsbeenalongday SILVER, Hendersonville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
The Time you enjoy wasting is not wasted time!

Hahaha good anti terrorist story!

It was I dont know maybe it needed to flow a little bit more but I really liked it!

Very Funny

Good Job



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