Karma

October 21, 2011
By Angelicajoy__ GOLD, South Plainfield, New Jersey
Angelicajoy__ GOLD, South Plainfield, New Jersey
18 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I’m stretched too thin,
this constant longing for you
will pull me apart"


You know what I love, stupid people. They make my day. They're so naive and gullible. I met this couple ,Adam and Eve, the other day and had to keep myself from laughing in their faces. The girl Eve believed everything I told her. I told her that the trees could talk and she had an in depth conversation with it for like three hours. It was like she was just born or something. The man, Adam, wasn't any better. I told him he could fly and he hopped off of the first tree he could get onto. He broke a couple bones too. I found it hilarious, unlike him. He had no sense of humor. Well, the day came when one of my pranks backfired. You see, there's this tree right in the middle of the garden that God told Adam and Eve to stay away from. Of course, I saw this as an opportunity to have a little more fun. Eve was walking through the garden and I called her over. I was taking my daily stroll so I wanted some company. We just happened (By coincidence) to pass that tree. And it also happened (By coincidence) that she didn't have breakfast yet. Well, lets just say she ate it, Adam ate it, both of them got kicked out of the garden, and I cant walk anymore. I now do something called slithering. Karma....


The author's comments:
After learning about Adam and Eves downfall for the MILLIONETH time in church, I decided to take the sin from the snakes point of view.

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on Dec. 14 2011 at 1:25 pm
Angelicajoy__ GOLD, South Plainfield, New Jersey
18 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I’m stretched too thin,
this constant longing for you
will pull me apart"

Thanks soo much :) Appreciated really

Zxarra GOLD said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 5:26 pm
Zxarra GOLD, Fitzwilliam, New Hampshire
14 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
Earth without art is "eh"

You're welcome! I also like the ending.

on Dec. 13 2011 at 1:14 pm
Angelicajoy__ GOLD, South Plainfield, New Jersey
18 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I’m stretched too thin,
this constant longing for you
will pull me apart"

Thanks :) I will take that too mind

Zxarra GOLD said...
on Nov. 19 2011 at 2:06 pm
Zxarra GOLD, Fitzwilliam, New Hampshire
14 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
Earth without art is "eh"

Nice! I like the point of view of the snake. However, I think you could expand a little bit and add some more descriptions.




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