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The Queen's Finale

September 27, 2009
By MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
79 articles 0 photos 210 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be a victim; be a titan.


Freezing cold. Too cold for a new spring day.
Looking around me at the solemn faces, maybe it's not the weather that's making it so cold. Maybe it's the horror that has tainted the air.
A gusty breeze weaves through the crowd, and ruffles my skirts away from my ankles. 15 and growing, my favorite gown is already too small.
The tall, thick man on the raised piece of stone is sharpening his sword. He's been sent all the way from France to do his job. To behead the queen.
Rumor has it that this French-man is a final gift from the king to the queen, Anne Boleyn. Horrid present, if you ask me. But I'm only a girl, a young girl. No one would ask me.
Suddenly, the slight murmur coming from the crowd ceases, and I look towards the Tower of London's entrance, and see the queen coming out. 3 of her ladies follow. The women following her have expressions that are as cloudy as the sky above, but Queen Anne is different. Lacking better words, I must say she seems...joyful.
Despite the current situation, a tiny smile teases her lips. The whispering in the crowd starts up again.
Then Anne Boleyn is at the tip of the stone platform. She gestures to the crowd.
"Good people, I come here to die, for I am sentenced, therefore shall not speak against anything. I haven't come here to accuse one, nor beg for mercy, because I am condemned. I hope the Lord does save the king, let him rule over you for long and good. There has never been a fairer prince in this land. And now I shall give myself to my Lord, and pray He has mercy on my soul."
She takes off her French hood (a fading fashion in the king's court), her necklace made of only the finest jewels, and lastly, her signature Boleyn pearl choker.
Then the queen smirks at the man holding the sword and looks slyly up at him with those dark eyes. "Pardon my thin neck, sir." she jokes. That's Anne Boleyn, never fails to entertain.
The groups of people come to watch chuckle. With that, she kneels. I bow my head, a final token of respect. Anne begins muttering a prayer, as the swordsman begins to count. When he reaches two, he swings the weapon. Though I am not looking, I can hear the late queen's head hit the ground with a sickening thump. A quick death. One try.
The crowd begins to part, their daily entertainment over with. At last, few people remain. I glance over to see who stays, and notice Mary Boleyn, Anne's older sister. I walk slowly towards.
"Contrary to popular belief...I think Anne was a great lady." I inform her.
Mary stares at me. "For that I thank you. But you do put yourself in great risk speaking to me."
"I know." is all I need to reply.
She nods, and turns on her heel. The last Boleyn to ever grace the king's castle.
So I follow her lead, and walk away. Back to the warm halls of the castle, the flirting people of the ballrooms, and the haunting memories of Anne Boleyn.


The author's comments:
Second piece I've written about Anne Boleyn...if you can't tell, I like to write about her!

The speech she gave before she was beheaded is my own version of what Lancelot de Carles in Paris wrote, though he did not attend the execution, so no one is sure if that's really what she said.
I found it on Wikipedia, and just edited it to my own words, more modern so it's easier to read.

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Gypsy said...
on Sep. 4 2012 at 5:11 pm
I really liked this story. It was gripping and fantastic, it was gruesome and disturbing.... My kind of story.i love this type of historical fiction and I want to read more! I highly recommend this story. :D

Amazing m&i said...
on Sep. 4 2012 at 5:00 pm
The story was really strong because you  captured the moment with great detail-izzy i thought the story was really interesting because you described what happened really well. mikya

M1I2 said...
on Sep. 4 2012 at 4:54 pm
Your story was rea‚Äčly strong because you captured the moment in full detail  izzy i think that your story was really interesting because it describes what happened really well. mikyla

on Apr. 3 2012 at 4:12 pm
aurorairis SILVER, Darien, Connecticut
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Wow! I am obsessed with King Henry the eigth and his six wives! Very well written!

Please check out some of my work!


on Apr. 3 2012 at 4:12 pm
aurorairis SILVER, Darien, Connecticut
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Wow! I am obsessed with King Henry the eigth and his six wives! Very well written!

Please check out some of my work!


wilderose121 said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 4:25 pm
beautiful! 5/roses

Angelic_Rose said...
on Jun. 1 2011 at 9:22 pm
Angelic_Rose, Cottonwood, California
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Favorite Quote:
"What's meant to be, will find its way".

sweet :) that's great

on May. 31 2011 at 4:04 pm
MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
79 articles 0 photos 210 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be a victim; be a titan.

Thank you very much!

I truly appreciate that you read it, and I'm glad you like it.

And I will always keep up the writing ;3


Angelic_Rose said...
on May. 31 2011 at 2:10 pm
Angelic_Rose, Cottonwood, California
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Favorite Quote:
"What's meant to be, will find its way".

wow, that was simply amazing. Usually i don't read articles on Teenink, but this one i couldn't pass. And I'm glad i didn't. This was great! keep the writing up :)

on Apr. 17 2011 at 8:34 pm
MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
79 articles 0 photos 210 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be a victim; be a titan.

I live in the US, but I would adore visiting the Tower of London, or just London in general. Hopefully someday :)

Thank you very much for reading!


on Apr. 17 2011 at 1:26 pm
ClaraRose SILVER, Glasgow, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"It's not what we are born, but what we grow to be."

"you think that because I am Poor, Obscure, Plain and little, that I am Soulless and Heartless. I have just as much soul as you and full as much heart"

If you havent visited the tower of London, you shouls, you can see the space where the executed lots of people, I have been many times, considering im british and it is a great place for imagination, if you cant visit google it and write more about the setting itself, for me it would give the story a little something extra

on Jul. 27 2010 at 3:36 am
Healing_Angel SILVER, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Live for today, not for tomorrow

Great job!

on Jan. 31 2010 at 2:53 pm
lilmissravenclaw SILVER, Warrenton, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be less curious about people and more curious about ideas. -Marie Curie

I loved this story so much! Anne Boleyn was very interestingly portrayed in your story! Loved it!

on Oct. 22 2009 at 6:45 pm
SugarnSpice SILVER, Aurora, Colorado
5 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A woman's heart is a deep ocean of secrets."-Titanic

I really liked it!! I've heard about Anne Boleyn, but never really knew the whole story. Thanks for telling me some of it!

Zoe_T PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 7:43 am
Zoe_T PLATINUM, New City, New York
38 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss

I am a huge fan of the Tudors, especially Anne Boleyn. Your piece was great! Keep up the good work!

on Oct. 16 2009 at 3:40 pm
dancer4jesus BRONZE, San Marcos, California
2 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
The heart writes the words of the music that the soul dances to.

That was good! Although it was short, it had good description and imagery. :)


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