They’ve all plotted against me for nine months; it’d seem their plans are coming to fruition. Last December 25th I dreamt I was raped by a demon; now it is September 25th, and that demon’s spawn is being born. The people around me do nothing to ease the worst pain I’ve ever felt. As that pain is released I see the eyes of the new-born. They’re an animal’s.
The Antichrist
tdpackerfanThis was not even a story. There was no plot development or character development. This was instead a cliche-ridden waste of time about yet another demon-baby being born. We have heard this a million times. This was nothing.
team_haymitch
this isnt really historical, but i love it! really cool!
writerfreak21231
I LOVED THE STORY!!! Great job and keep on writing!!! one of my stories was just posted. if anyone could read it that would be great. Its called: Alien Invasion Series: Book One: The Caller. just click my user name and then that story and start reading, I enjoy the comments and feedback! :)(:
Hippiealieni don't get it.. It's hardly a story,and has no plot.. Good description but i don't get it.. O.O
crazy-ashbobashinteresting, im not really sure what time in history this is about or what this is about but it has a cool feeling to it, i got chills while reading!!
dancergirl3I feel that you have GREAT description but, i don't get the idea of the story! But i would love to read more of your pieces very interesting! :)
Shelly-TThis is very intriguing, but I don't really get it.
Nice work, keep it up.
ZadaRox101Uh, this isn't really historical. It's like present or future.
Eratoreally different, but in a good way. could be longer and have more elaboration on the story.
KiraKiraStrange in an eerily intriguing way. Short and sweet. :)
not strange really, more like weird , but it is intresting . And it's very imaginative !
nixchixContinue it. I want to know about her and what happens.
Read Revelations in the Bible if you want to know the whole story.
It was a school project. I had just gotten out of church and was just writing stuff down.
And to everyone who wants to know how it ends, come up with your own ending. I'm too lazy to.
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