May 14, 2008
Once upon a time lived a very wealthy princess named Cinderella.
She has two sisters that work for her in a five star restraunt.
She married a poor man. They got married & had two kids and lived in a mansion.
One day they were reading the
newspaper and it said that they have
gone broke. They were all confused they rushed straight to the editor of the newspaper. When they got there Cinderella asked why it was in the newspaper.
He said that two girls came by and told him to put it in the newspaper.
Then Cinderella asked who the girls look like.
He said that they were here sisters. Then she rushed home and put her sisters in the dungeon. They went back to newspaper editor & told him that was not true. Then Cinderella went on a search for new workers. She stopped several times and never found one.
The next day some one came into the restraint
and asked if she would be right for the job. Cinderella asked her some questions. Then a couple hours later she came out and said you are perfect for the job. They all lived happily ever after.

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Cayte O. said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 9:40 pm
This, I'm sorry, made no sense. There needs to be details and describing words. Fix it up, shape it into a story, then repost.
thestorycritic said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 5:04 am
Sorry, but WHAT?
ThatClarinetPerson said...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 5:06 pm
rhymertapperdreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 10:14 am
I liked the story, but it's sort of choppy.  Maybe add details such as thoughts, feelings, or stuff that applies to the five senses. :)
eye4beuaty said...
May 14, 2010 at 2:06 pm
couldn't quite follow it
Sophie B. said...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 3:15 pm

Well, it's unique...

No offence, but I really don't get it.

brainiac said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 11:09 pm
Interesting. Very interesting.
UncertainlyClear said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 2:34 am
i dont get it.....
JonasLover89 replied...
Jan. 2, 2010 at 7:06 pm
it's a weird take on a twisted fairytale.
writergirl13 replied...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 4:45 pm
Don't worry, I don't really get it either. :)
DivaStar8997 replied...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 8:27 pm
Yeah, it was kind of weird. 
Meep. replied...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 9:10 pm
I Like it, but it seems to need more constructive language to build up to a point, otherwise it seems a little more mediocre.
NeverFallTooHard replied...
Nov. 28, 2010 at 10:16 am
Well, this was...different....
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