Cinderella

May 14, 2008
By Kristen Chappell, Dixon, KY

Once upon a time lived a very wealthy princess named Cinderella.
She has two sisters that work for her in a five star restraunt.
She married a poor man. They got married & had two kids and lived in a mansion.
One day they were reading the
newspaper and it said that they have
gone broke. They were all confused they rushed straight to the editor of the newspaper. When they got there Cinderella asked why it was in the newspaper.
He said that two girls came by and told him to put it in the newspaper.
Then Cinderella asked who the girls look like.
He said that they were here sisters. Then she rushed home and put her sisters in the dungeon. They went back to newspaper editor & told him that was not true. Then Cinderella went on a search for new workers. She stopped several times and never found one.
The next day some one came into the restraint
and asked if she would be right for the job. Cinderella asked her some questions. Then a couple hours later she came out and said you are perfect for the job. They all lived happily ever after.


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on Nov. 28 2010 at 10:16 am
NeverFallTooHard PLATINUM, Hartford, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Reason is powerless in the expression of Love.~ Rumi
Realisim, in painting, is what one wants to see, not what they really see. ~ Janet Fish

Well, this was...different....

on Nov. 6 2010 at 9:40 pm
WintersRevenge PLATINUM, Ponte Vedra Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Yay! I love being purple!" ~Patrick Star, Spongebob Squarepants

This, I'm sorry, made no sense. There needs to be details and describing words. Fix it up, shape it into a story, then repost.

on Nov. 6 2010 at 5:04 am
thestorycritic GOLD, Hyderabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Live life King Size

Sorry, but WHAT?

SawyerT BRONZE said...
on Oct. 15 2010 at 9:10 pm
SawyerT BRONZE, Crown Point, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
I'm just a pacifist with violent words.

I Like it, but it seems to need more constructive language to build up to a point, otherwise it seems a little more mediocre.

on Sep. 23 2010 at 5:06 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

     what?

on Aug. 10 2010 at 10:14 am
writerfluid SILVER, Tempe, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Greater good? I am your wife. I am the greatest good you are ever gonna get!

I liked the story, but it's sort of choppy.  Maybe add details such as thoughts, feelings, or stuff that applies to the five senses. :)

on May. 14 2010 at 2:06 pm
eye4beauty BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"That sounds like a personal problem."
~Abby

couldn't quite follow it

on Apr. 3 2010 at 3:15 pm
foreverwelsh BRONZE, Cardiff, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Thin, like butter over too much bread" JRR Tolkien

Well, it's unique...

No offence, but I really don't get it.


on Mar. 31 2010 at 11:09 pm
brainiac SILVER, Grove City, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Time keeps on slipping, slipping, slipping into the future.

Interesting. Very interesting.

on Mar. 31 2010 at 8:27 pm
BeckoningLovely GOLD, Wilmington, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
"I think our favorite quotes say more about us than the people we are quoting," John Green

Yeah, it was kind of weird. 

on Mar. 31 2010 at 4:45 pm
writergirl13 GOLD, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
All are lunatics, but he who can analyze his delusions is called a philosopher.
Ambrose Bierce

Don't worry, I don't really get it either. :)

on Jan. 2 2010 at 7:06 pm
BeckoningLovely GOLD, Wilmington, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
"I think our favorite quotes say more about us than the people we are quoting," John Green

it's a weird take on a twisted fairytale.

on Dec. 11 2009 at 2:34 am
UncertainlyClear BRONZE, Haikou, Other
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i dont get it.....


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