Cinderella

May 14, 2008
By Kristen Chappell, Dixon, KY

Once upon a time lived a very wealthy princess named Cinderella.
She has two sisters that work for her in a five star restraunt.
She married a poor man. They got married & had two kids and lived in a mansion.
One day they were reading the
newspaper and it said that they have
gone broke. They were all confused they rushed straight to the editor of the newspaper. When they got there Cinderella asked why it was in the newspaper.
He said that two girls came by and told him to put it in the newspaper.
Then Cinderella asked who the girls look like.
He said that they were here sisters. Then she rushed home and put her sisters in the dungeon. They went back to newspaper editor & told him that was not true. Then Cinderella went on a search for new workers. She stopped several times and never found one.
The next day some one came into the restraint
and asked if she would be right for the job. Cinderella asked her some questions. Then a couple hours later she came out and said you are perfect for the job. They all lived happily ever after.


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Axela17 GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2015 at 10:32 am
Axela17 GOLD, New Bremen, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I have been crucified with Christ and I no longer live, but Christ lives in me. The life I live by the body, I live by faith in the son of God, who loved me and gave himself for me." -Galatians 2:20

Always proofread before sending in work!

on Oct. 24 2013 at 9:12 am
Demoderby PLATINUM, Pontiac, Illinois
28 articles 13 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or dream is but a dream within a dream
-Edgar Allen Poe

how could it be cool if you didn't understand it? I'm just asking...

on Oct. 24 2013 at 9:10 am
Demoderby PLATINUM, Pontiac, Illinois
28 articles 13 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or dream is but a dream within a dream
-Edgar Allen Poe

No offence or any meaning to hurt ur feelings I tell my opinion my true words too... Compleetly pointless and a waste of time. I just re read it and I don't understand it still. And I think you wasted away. This was a confusing waste away. Sorry but many others also thought it was bad.   Maybe next time you can write something better? Maybe re-weite this story and put more depth into it and have more feeling in it... It would sound much better if you re-wrote it. -my oppinion-

on Oct. 24 2013 at 9:01 am
Demoderby PLATINUM, Pontiac, Illinois
28 articles 13 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or dream is but a dream within a dream
-Edgar Allen Poe

I agree, this story was pretty bad. But maybe next time you can do better... But in fair share I think it was bad and you could do better.

on Jul. 6 2013 at 10:26 am
Starstruck_001, Great Neck, New York
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I'm really sorry for being a Simon Cowell on this, but to my honest opinion; this was really bad--no offence. But like what they said before, you cant just type up something random like this and expect it to be on the front page of the magazine or something. You need to develop your style, and make your writing look like you took effort on it. Other then that, I seriously think you should edit this thoroughly. Sorry about it...........but its the truth 

on Jul. 5 2013 at 11:38 pm
WannaBeWriter3, New Palestine, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
live your life to the fullest....

what.... how did this get up here, no offence but this was bad

wordtea GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2013 at 10:59 am
wordtea GOLD, Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'All men shall die.'- A Clash of Kings
'We accept the love we think we deserve.'- The Perks of Being a Wallflower
'Sometimes people are beautiful. Not in looks. Not in what they say. Just in what they are.'- The Book Thief

I'm sorry but your story is meaningless

on Jan. 6 2013 at 7:46 am
LinkinPark12 PLATINUM, Lincolnshire, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Work like you don’t need money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like no one's watching. ¦ I like change - but only when everything stays the same.

I don't really get it... No offence... It's a bit confusing..

BellaCharlie said...
on Nov. 23 2012 at 6:20 pm
BellaCharlie, Osler, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing is impossible, the word itself says 'I'm possible'!
-Audrey Hepburn

I didn't really understand what the point of the story was. If you developed the plot a bit more and included some more details, I'm sure it would be a great story.

on Aug. 27 2012 at 6:48 pm
RandiRose SILVER, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
You must be the change you wish to see in the world.

I agree, good concept, but needs way more time and effort.

on Aug. 27 2012 at 6:47 pm
RandiRose SILVER, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
You must be the change you wish to see in the world.

I wrote a modern fairytale with lots of details called "Skylar West and the Seven Runaways" check it out and tell me what you think!!!!

J1029 SILVER said...
on May. 31 2012 at 11:38 am
J1029 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Sing like no one is listening,
Dance like no one is watching,
Love like you've never been hurt and
Live like it's heaven on earth.

- Mark Twain

I didn't like it at all, pointless, and stupid. Try more details and a writing class.

ZairaFire said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 9:17 pm
I didn't really like the characters and the story seemed pointless. I think the plot would be interesting if you added more words and more feedback to what happened.

GeeGi BRONZE said...
on Sep. 10 2011 at 11:48 pm
GeeGi BRONZE, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
“Being crazy isn't enough.”
― Dr. Seuss

“Why fit in when you were born to stand out?”
― Dr. Seuss

I'm sorry, but this makes me think that it was writen by a 2nd grader. I don't know if you were just writing junk or something, but I really think that if your going to post a story, it should look like it took more that 5 minutes to write. Also, you have a few spelling errors. I know I'm being harsh, but someone has to say it. Sorry.

on Jul. 28 2011 at 8:53 am
andromeda13 SILVER, Barrie, Other
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yeah it just seems like you got really bored, and wrote something random. .. 

on May. 23 2011 at 9:34 pm
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

i dont know if this is just a... well, are you just bored? the product of your boredom is not good enough.. try adding some detail and... hmmm, pratice..

on Feb. 2 2011 at 10:00 am
just-another-url GOLD, Cannes, Other
16 articles 6 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's a good thing to be strange. Normalness leads to sadness." -Philip Lester

sorry, meant * or stop writing

on Feb. 2 2011 at 9:59 am
just-another-url GOLD, Cannes, Other
16 articles 6 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's a good thing to be strange. Normalness leads to sadness." -Philip Lester

hum, sorry but I didn't get it :( 

Don't give up of stop writing tough! It's hard and sometimes it takes a while... read what you wrote, re-write what you're not sure about and fix little things that you don't like. Just because you wrote it doesn't mean that you can't change it over and over. Then, read it again out loud and see if it flows well and finally, you should read it to a friend or family to get a second opinion. 

Best of luck, and keep writing :) 


on Dec. 20 2010 at 10:07 pm
freewriter_123 SILVER, Miramar, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Whoever said nothing was impossible never tried slamming a revolving door." ;)

This is definetly more of a poem thatn a story. Im sorry, but no

lollypops GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2010 at 8:53 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Live

umm sorry it was cool but i didnt get it




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