Harvest Moon ~part 12~

November 6, 2010
By Amer-Nae PLATINUM, Maynard, Arkansas
Amer-Nae PLATINUM, Maynard, Arkansas
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Why try to fit in when you were born to stand out?


It'd been a few days since I'd been home. I wore the necklace from Cauis and the braclet from Alec. My Mother's eyes always wondered to the items when, I was in the room. I couldn't help but smile. She was always a worry wort. But, she kept a close eye on me since I'd been home. I think she's still alittle jumpy. My Father however trusted my judgement. After all I was his daughter. Jacob hadn't come to see me. So I decided that I would go and see him today. As I walked up on the porch of Emily and Sam's place the door flung open and Embry was standing there. He smiles. "Hey, halfling. What's up?" I shake my head. Embry was usually the one calliing me by my full name. To be honest. I think he's kind of scared of me..or he was.
"Embry I need to talk to Jake." Embry steps out of the way and there Jacob was. He looked angry and with me. I stand straight. Jacob steps out on the porch and leads me down to the beach. As he turns and faces me I know that I am in trouble.
"Renesmee what were you thinking?! Do you understand that you could have been killed or worse?" I stood there and took it. I knew that I deserved it. Because my parents and my family refused to yell at me. "I know that you are mad at me. I'm sorry that I made you worry and you are right." Jake stood there speechless. I didn't smile. I could feel tears threating to come. Jacob craddles my face in his hands. I felt my heart beat pick up and it already races out of control anyway. I close my eyes. Jake kisses my eyelids, cheeks. nose and finally his lips found mine. They were soft and hot against mine. I couldn't breathe..but in a good way. As the kiss deepened. I felt his hair between my fingers. He pulls away and presses his forhead against mine.
"Well, that wasn't what I thought would happened..but it was better than what I thought by far." I couldn't help but to giggle. This was the boy I was going to spend the rest of my life with. He was such a dork. I caught a glimpse of something shiny. I look at it and it was the braclet Alec gave me. I felt like crying. Alec.......


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on Feb. 20 2013 at 2:06 am
Amer-Nae PLATINUM, Maynard, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
Why try to fit in when you were born to stand out?

thank you that means alot to me :)

on Feb. 20 2013 at 2:05 am
Amer-Nae PLATINUM, Maynard, Arkansas
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Why try to fit in when you were born to stand out?

Well the Volturi said that they would be checking in on her and that was their way of checking in. I mean i thought that it was an amazing twist. U'd think that Nessie would hate them as much as the rest of her family and I guess to some point that she does but i wanted to potray Nessie as her person and give them a chance that way she could hate them on her own terms besides the whole ending to Breaking Dawn

on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:09 pm
Missy1999 SILVER, Windermere, Florida
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John 3:16

I loved all twelve! U hve an amazing talent please keep writing

on Dec. 16 2011 at 12:44 pm
cantdeleteaccounthelp, Sey, West Virginia
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I really liked it and enjoyed it! But I don't think that Cullens and the Volturi would like to be on a party together. And I don't understand yet why Nessie had to go with the Volturi. And if a vampire fell in love once probably he or she wouldn't do it again. Anyways, I love it! I couldn't stop once I started! Amazing story! Keep writing!

on Nov. 24 2011 at 10:11 pm
Amer-Nae PLATINUM, Maynard, Arkansas
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Why try to fit in when you were born to stand out?

Well it was nessie decision and i thought it would have been interesting and to be honest going to the party was the only way of getting her back...

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on Jul. 14 2011 at 7:26 pm
Webone1 BRONZE, Arnold, Maryland
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I like the story but you have a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. Once you fix those it'll be really good!

VampireX GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 9:10 am
VampireX GOLD, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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I don't think the Cullens and the Volturi would go to a party together after the...incident in the last book. But it's still good.




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