In iggys world

August 22, 2010
By EmiEm SILVER, Northampton, Pennsylvania
EmiEm SILVER, Northampton, Pennsylvania
5 articles 10 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I wasn't sitting in the desert in rave wear thinking about Simon Cowell when I was on acid."
~Adam Lambert~

"The work offered by organized crime must have an attraction to the insane."
~Dr. Crane/Scarecrow~


"Who wants to play in my world?" Gazzy shouted through the living room. "Me!" Angel replied. "Ooh, ooh, I do!" from Nudge. "Sure, sounds fun." came from Max. a single shrug from Fang then I answered. "I guess so."

On my way over to the couch I tripped. "Max! I thought you were done moving furniture." I yelled. "It's bad enough that i have to count steps through the house without having to memorize new furniture patterns."

"Sorry Ig'. Kinda forgot to tell ya." i mumbled under my breath as i found a seat on the couch. "Okay lets get started."

"Gaz, you first. it ws your idea."

"Okay. In my world there is green but no blue. Fang, you next."

"Okay, in my world there has to be yellow but no black." i felt the couch shake with his shudder of mock horror."Max."

"In my world there is Gazzy but no gas. Angel."

"In my world there is green but no red. Nudge."

"In my world there is hopping but no pogo sticks. Iggy."

"In my world i can see, but thats just a fantasy." i said, got off the couch and launched myself out the window.


The author's comments:
this is a Max fanfic. in my world i am Iggy, whn things get in the way, i trip over them, but i can somewhat cook. and my sister is Max. always in the lead, and always helping me out when i need it.

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on Dec. 12 2011 at 7:21 pm
Bballstar98 SILVER, Pearland, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The only place where success comes before work is the dictionary."

Awww...poor iggy! I love the Maximum Ride series though!

on Dec. 12 2011 at 9:50 am
Musicalartist, Xxxxx, Other
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everyone calls me Max, and I have my own flock :D

this is a really good story.

~Max <3


on Sep. 12 2011 at 12:04 pm
MidnightNow1127 GOLD, Brentwood, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Christus nos liberavit!"

Awwwww!!! Poor Iggs!!!

on Jul. 22 2011 at 8:25 pm
billgamesh11 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"It's always darkest before the dawn." ~Florence and the Machine

I love Maximum Ride!!! I love what you did with the story!!! Perfect!!!:):):)

EmiEm SILVER said...
on Oct. 28 2010 at 7:35 pm
EmiEm SILVER, Northampton, Pennsylvania
5 articles 10 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I wasn't sitting in the desert in rave wear thinking about Simon Cowell when I was on acid."
~Adam Lambert~

"The work offered by organized crime must have an attraction to the insane."
~Dr. Crane/Scarecrow~

nice. my friend brittney calls me iggy. im practically blind as it is, always bumping into things and stuff like that :)

on Oct. 27 2010 at 8:32 pm
Celia_storm BRONZE, Henderson, Nevada
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Good story. I love it! lol my nick name is Iggy but no one is aloud to call me it except my family. But good story i like it.

on Oct. 25 2010 at 4:51 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

You know what's funny? I've read the first three Maximum Ride books since I posted that comment, and I absolutely love them!

Oh, and I adore the ending to your story, it's perfect.


Emi-Sempai said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 7:31 am
wow im out of it...spelled maz qrong...just woke up, sorry

Emi-Sempai said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 7:30 am
dayum strait im blind xp lol lotsa lurve to mah sister Max <3 luv ya Max...even when you move the furniture around...

Emi-Sempai said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 7:27 am

awe thanks Maz! i love ya too :) mis you lots

-IGGY-


on Oct. 22 2010 at 10:21 pm
Maximum_Ride. BRONZE, Kingwood, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Mamma always said 'Life's like a box a chocolate's....yah neva know whatchya gonna get.'
~Forest Gump~

No the actual series James Patterson wrote MAX is the main character who isnt blind. Iggy is her little "brother" who is blind but can see when the background is all white he can see the people and all colors. he can also feel something and know the color of it. ha.

on Oct. 22 2010 at 10:18 pm
Maximum_Ride. BRONZE, Kingwood, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Mamma always said 'Life's like a box a chocolate's....yah neva know whatchya gonna get.'
~Forest Gump~

AWEEE YOU WROTE THIS ABOUT OUR BIRD FAMILY! :DD ha thats weird cause i wrote a chapter about me and you(MAX and IGGY) like how we used to play it out and stuff :DD ill email it too you. but ha this is so great girl! i love you your big sister

~max


L.T.A SILVER said...
on Aug. 29 2010 at 4:22 pm
L.T.A SILVER, Hammond, Indiana
7 articles 1 photo 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
All of the animals except for man know that the principle business of life is to enjoy it.-- Samuel Butler

oh okay. yeah i've seen those before in Borders but never read them

on Aug. 29 2010 at 3:54 pm
emergingtalent SILVER, Riverton, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and say what you feel, Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter won't mind. -Dr. Seuss

I loved this! Iggy is one of my favorite characters. I liked Fang's shudder of mock horror, that made me laugh....

on Aug. 28 2010 at 7:41 pm
CrazyWriter GOLD, Lorton Station, Virginia
16 articles 2 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once you have given up on the most important thing in your life, you begin to die, because then, you gradually lose your true self"~Hana Kimi
"Someone who can lie to themself. . . is lonely, and in pain"~Hana Kimi

Great job!!   I love the Maximum Ride Seris! (I was Crying at the end of Fang) :(  Anyway beides some grammar mistakes this. is . Fabulous!!

~CrazyWriter

btw: my articles looovve to be read


Whylime said...
on Aug. 28 2010 at 11:25 am
Whylime, Brentwood, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Grief is the price we pay for love -- Queen Elizabeth ll
Don't go there, I'll only follow -- ???
Why is a raven like a writing desk? -- The Mad Hatter from Alice in Wonderland
Chewing gum is really gross, chewing gum I hate the most -- Willy W.

i really like this series and this was pretty good except for grammar and some word choice that bothered me... overally great series and great fan fiction. (i have found though that the series really has gone downhill-- Max and Fang novels really disappointed me)

Chloe_ BRONZE said...
on Aug. 27 2010 at 10:51 pm
Chloe_ BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never underestimate the power of doing the ordinary in quite extraordinary ways.

based on the maximum ride series by james patterson one of my favorties!  Great work!

L.T.A SILVER said...
on Aug. 27 2010 at 7:30 pm
L.T.A SILVER, Hammond, Indiana
7 articles 1 photo 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
All of the animals except for man know that the principle business of life is to enjoy it.-- Samuel Butler

I like it but what book is it from

on Aug. 26 2010 at 7:51 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Cool :)

I like the personalities, and you did very well with how short it is. I especially like the ending, it kind of suddenly wakes you up, I guess.

It the main character blind? I'm not familiar with the series.


on Aug. 26 2010 at 7:49 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Hehehe, I think you spelled sentence wrong :)

It's very kind of you to help Emi-Sempai with typos, spelling, and grammer errors :)



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