The Girl Who Can't Cry

February 24, 2010
By GraceGallows PLATINUM, Plainville, Massachusetts
GraceGallows PLATINUM, Plainville, Massachusetts
41 articles 32 photos 13 comments

There he was right in front of me dying. My true love and he was dying because of me. I look at myself in the mirror my razor sharp teeth, frightining beauty, my stregnth. Thats what possibly killed him my stupid strenth. I was a special, I didn't want to be it just happend, my mom is the head special, Dr.Cable. thats why I'm a special she made me this way, now poor inocent Ren is dying in this hospital bed. I can't belive it all I did was hug him, but my streanth was to much. All this but I was made so I couldn't cry, no matter how much I wanted to I couldn't. "Ren I, I'm so sorry I didn't mean to hurt you" "It's okay Valeyana-wa I will still love you forever even after I die but I want you to always remember, you are my angel my rising sun you are my rainb-" "Ren, Ren, (I was now yelling) REN you can't die you can't" how badly I wanted to cry but I just couldn't, why why him he never did anything bad, not even as an ugly, he never got drunk at the pretty parties, now I heard a terrible beeping sound and doctors came in " umm miss I am terribly sorry that your boyfriend died but you are going to have to leave" I quickly asked them if their was any possible way to save him. "no no no once they die nothing can be done, but it is rather surprising you arn't crying" my evil mom how I hate I ran away to Diago and made them turn me into a bubble head so i wouldn't remember any of this and so I looked different they did and then returned me to my normal city, I still remembered Ren, but I never found true love again. every night i whispered I'm sorry Ren to the ceiling. I got so many pictures and every thing possible about him from my smart wall, I will never forget what happend to him and how it was all my fault, poor poor Ren-la


The author's comments:
I wrote this last year, it is based on Specials by Scott Westerfeld

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on Mar. 11 2010 at 5:10 pm
PuzzleLuver SILVER, Powell, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"For God so loved the world that he gave his only Son, so that everyone who believes in him might not perish but have eternal life" John 3:16

Good job. I agree it needs more backround info for someone who didn't read Specials. I loved it though, keep writing:)

Riley141 GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 4:45 pm
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
" Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest." Mark Twain

I think it would have been better if you gave more backround info... because someone who hasen't read "Specials" woulden't understand what you were talking about....but keep writing..you're realy good.


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