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The Unexpected Tale of Rose Weasley and Scorpius Malfoy

A warm, late spring breeze swirled around the train station, Platform 9 ¾. Rose Weasley had stepped off the train, fresh off her third year, hand in hand with Scorpius Malfoy. She was hoping to part before either of their fathers saw them together. Mortal enemies in Hogwarts, mortal enemies for life. But of course, inheriting her father’s lack of luck, Ronald Weasley, with an embarrassed Hermione Weasley trailing behind, stormed up to the couple, fury raging behind green eyes.

“Oh… Mr. Weasley,” Scorpius began, trying to make a good impression by holding out his hand.

“Get away from my daughter, you foul pure blood!” Ron shouted. Hermione buried her head in her hands, trying to hide from the scene.

“But, dad, Scorpius isn’t who you think-“ Rose stuttered, getting cut off by her overly protective father.

“He is exactly who I know he is! A filthy, rude, Slytherin by heart!” Ron raged, fiery red hair standing on end.

“BUT HE’S NOT IN SLYTHERIN!” Rose screeched, causing all mouths to drop. Ron’s furious eyes emptied to blank confusion. Hermione’s hands slid away from her face and stepped forward to see this miraculous wonder; the first Malfoy not in Slytherin. By standers even glared with question.

“Then… what is it?” Ron inquired, curiously staring at Scorpius face. He resembled his father so much, how could he not be affected by the curse of Slytherin?

“Ravenclaw,” Scorpius spoke up. Hermione’s eyes brightened, a clever boy like Scorpius would be perfect for her intelligent daughter, Rose.

“But- I’ve seen you in Slytherin robes!” Ron paced, trying to figure this all out.

“I bought them. I wear them around my father. At school I hang out with Gryffindors Rose, James, Lilly, and Albus, and Ravenclaws like Lorena and Lyzar, Ms. Lovegood’s kids. The Slytherins disgust me, and they always pester me about my blood lines and evil ancestors,” Scorpius explained sufficiently.

“Ok then… Let’s go Rose… Say goodbye to your friend…” Hermione said, baffled. She helped Ron carry away her bags while they greeted Hugo.

“Scorpius!” Draco Malfoy called through the bustling halls of the platform.

“ Um… Dad. Hi,” Scorpius stuttered. Rose gripped his arm; It was time.

“What are you doing with that Weasley girl? Didn’t I tell you about her?” Draco scoffed, piercing black eyes darting around Rose’s face; her physical appearance was too striking to her father to ignore.

“Hello, Mr. Malfoy,” Rose stated politely. Draco sneered in response.

“Isn’t it nearly impossible for you to fancy her? You know, Slytherin vs. Griffyndor?” Draco inquired, sounding more like a nervous dad than pompous pure blood.

“Well… Dad. I’m not in Slytherin or Gryffindor,” Scorpius began.

“Oh, don’t tell me you’re a Hufflepuff!”

“No, I’m not… I’m a proud Ravenclaw who socializes with Lorena and Lyzar Lovegood, Ravenclaw, Griffydors Victorie, Hugo, Rose Weasley, and Teddy Tonks, and to your most dislike, James, Albus, and Lilly Potter,” Scorpius proudly declared, leaving his poor old father wordless. But without warning, the dark eyes were more than piercing. They were angry, furious, fuming with rage. Just when it seemed as if Draco Malfoy would have a hemorrhage, a dependable source interlude.

“Malfoy! Back off my niece and her friend,” Harry Potter bluntly affirmed, fingering his wand in the back pocket of his jeans.

“Ah, Potter, my old… nemesis,” Draco spit, the venom in his mouth more evident than his receding hairline, “as you may have heard, my…offspring… is none the less an ‘intellectual’ Ravenclaw, and no longer welcome in the House of Malfoy.”

“He is more than welcome to stay with Ginny, James, Albus, Lilly, Teddy, and I,” Harry nodded to an illuminated Scorpius.

“Please, I’d rather him stay with Weasleys,” Draco groaned. Rose brightened, exchanging a joyous look at Scorpius.

“And it shall be,” Hermione stepped up, Hugo, Bill, Fleur, Victorie, Teddy, Ron, Lilly, James, Albus, and Ginny all behind as the Potter-Weasley-Tonks-Potter clan.

“Take the disgusting Boggart. Pansy!” Draco sneered and turned away, snapping for his teary-eyed wife, who had been observing the whole time, to follow.

“Welcome to the family, Malfoy!” James cheered as the big happy family Apparated back to the Potters’ for a celebration.



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TheMockingjay said...
Mar. 3 at 12:33 pm:
Hi! I thought this was overall well-written, and I really like that Scorpius is in Ravenclaw. The only critique I have is that I think Draco was a bit harsh, because in the end of the book he's sort of left the dark side. I also think there's not that much hatred between the Weasleys+Potters and the Malfoys, I know they'd never really be on friend terms but I think they've kind of left behind the past. Other then that I really like the Scorpius+Rose ship and I think you did an overall great job!... (more »)
 
wheelie21 replied...
Mar. 8 at 6:23 pm :
I think that the reactions are the funniest part.
 
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sufferinslience said...
Feb. 10 at 10:54 am:
i loved this it was awesome and i really hate malfoy but u changed that
 
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HannahLeah97 said...
Feb. 6 at 11:37 am:
I'm going to sound like such a Harry Potter geek in this comment, but I must correct you. When Ron scoffs at Scorpius and calls him a pure blood, that can't possibly be a very valid insult because Ron is a pure blood as well. Also, doesn't Draco have grey eyes rather than black? lastly: Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw are my two favorite houses, thanks for including them (:
 
TheMockingjay replied...
Mar. 3 at 12:37 pm :
I'm going to be a Potterhead here and mention that Draco marries Astoria Greengrass, who's a Slytherin a year younger than him. Not really a big deal though because you only mention Draco's wife once, still a great fanfic!
 
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MistrBrightersideThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 3 at 8:12 am:
I had, just yesterday, finished reading all of the HP series and I really like what you did with the epilogue. Although I have to agree with some of the other comments; Harry and Draco realized their positions as a adults compared to their teenage years, considering Harry had saved Draco I think twice in Deathly Hallows. I'd think they'd have a neutral relation. Overall it was creatively awesome!!
 
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writereadloveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 6 at 3:04 pm:
I agree with most of the people here. Draco definitely wasn't as evil when the books ended. I'm pretty sure he even nodded to harry in the epilouge, so he wouldn't be his nemisis anymore. although it was pretty unrealistic, i was already a strong believer in rose and scorpius (idk why).
 
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BeckoningLovelyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 4 at 9:32 am:
Rereading this, it is so far from canon it makes me cringe, so I apologize - I might re-write this at a later date!
 
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Mirisa said...
Jan. 4 at 9:13 am:
no. he married hannah abbott... i can't remember who luna married though... :/
 
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writersrevengeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 28, 2011 at 11:12 pm:
I liked the story but in the epilougue i got the feeling draco liked his son more the that. Other than that keep up the good work.
 
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msoledadvcThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 12:57 pm:

I thought that Draco changed sides... I liked it but only two issues that made me doubt a little bit: Pansy wasn't Draco's wife, and you shouldn't write all the people he likes from other houses. That's it.

I like it! Keep writing!

 
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otherpoetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 6, 2011 at 7:46 pm:
This story made me laugh!
 
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MirisaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 6, 2011 at 11:07 am:
I loved this! I want to do the same thing only with Neville Longbottom's daughter(the best part of it is that no one knows if Neville had kids or not!). So what do you think?
 
Rebekah_CruzThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 28, 2011 at 1:57 pm :
Didn't Neville hook up with Luna?
 
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SakuraKissu said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:26 pm:
I love his wifes name, Pansy :) I liked this, really cute.
 
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Annavk98 said...
Oct. 31, 2011 at 3:28 pm:
Though I found it a bit unrealistisc, It was really funny!
 
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PackerFan12 said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 5:39 pm:
Personally I love the Rose Scorpius idea, but I found the dialogue not at all similar to what they really talk like. Draco would not call Harry is nemesis. At the end of the book, they were slightly courteous to each other, and both realize their place.
 
DamonSalvatore1864This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 12:45 pm :
I think this has the right idea, but I think it's a little harsh to have Malfoy disown his son. At the end of DH, Malfoy seemed more...civil. This makes it out to be that he's still an a-hole. Great job, though! 
 
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writeamongthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 1, 2011 at 3:13 pm:
I've always thought Rose and Scorpius were going to end up together, so of course I like the idea. The way you put it is a little awkward in places but it's okay.
 
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Catiejune said...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 10:20 am:
you did a really good job but when i started writing (i havent posted anything yet!) i always used too big of words or it didnt run smoothly. yours is an amazing story but you should find a way to make it run smooth
 
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writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 4:47 pm:
wow, this was awesome! keep writing, cuz your really good! If anyone had time, could you please check out my new song never. . . thanks a bunch! :)(:
 
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HollerGirl26 said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 9:04 am:
Very sweet :)
 
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beccaboo22This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 12:57 am:
i love the harry potter seres, so this was veary awsome! i was sad win it ended, so it was nice to read what hapend after. it is veary well riten, like it belonges in the story, i love it!
 
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MoraleAshThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 12:23 am:
I loved the idea~so creative! I do believe the writing is a little awkward, but it was great nonetheless. I enjoyed it.
 
SunshineGonnaWashMyBluesAway12 replied...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 10:24 am :
I agree it started out really well but then got a little childish and unrealistic at the end, still love the idea though! Love the kids point of view!
 
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TorioT4 said...
May 22, 2011 at 6:49 pm:
haha i loved itt veryy appropiatee! i never thought about those two being together very creative!
 
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wasauskyx said...
May 5, 2011 at 2:33 pm:
I've only read the 1st HP book but I love the movies. This is great, I like it very much.
 
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CelebrateKrismasThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 12:32 am:
This is great! If you are into Harry Potter then I suggest you check out my HP & continued. I hope you like it! This made me laugh! (:
 
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randomcreepystalker said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 10:24 pm:
YES!!! i havent ever seen this one before!!! muy perfecto XD great, just wonderful
 
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A. N. Mouse said...
Feb. 18, 2011 at 7:23 am:

I like the idea, and it was really a wonderful story, but I really think that after Hogwarts and the war, Draco Malfoy would've become more tolerant towards non-Slytherins. If you have any backstory to explain how he got this way, completely against all of them, even through the war, I would love to read it :)

 

~A. N. Mouse~

 
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RhiaSnape said...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 11:31 am:
I like this story. I love the idea with Scorpius as a Ravenclaw because I always expected him a Slytherin. Oh yes! I like James' last sentence "Welcome to the family, Malfoy!" It made me laught.
I think Draco's wife is Astoria Greengrass and not Pansy. And the Lovegood-children are called Lorcan and Lysander. But I think that doesn't really matter because it's only stuff J.K. Rowling told us after finishing her books.
After all... a great text. ;)
 
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Kelz1141This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 12:45 pm:
lol I would give you an unbiased opinion of this article but I don't have one. I love DRACO! I don't think he is actually very evil at all, just had the wrong upbringing.
 
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satellite23This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 5, 2010 at 6:44 pm:
Why does everyone compare this to the books? Really, it was good as a stand-alone piece. You cannot emulate Rowling's writing style....so what you did was great.
 
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Dragonscribe said...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 8:44 pm:
Yeah it is a little awkward, but what else can you really do with a great series like that? It's going to sound weird no matter how you write it. I thought you did a very good job.
 
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Gryffinclaw8997This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 1:42 pm:
This is really not my best writing! I actually just finished reading the whole series a week ago, and now I read it and I cringe hahaha. So if you want more HP fanfic, wait until the next chapter of "James and Lily Lived" comes out!
 
SharpieChance replied...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 5:17 pm :
I read this first before I knew what happened and didn't know that was how it was supposed to be sort of. Not Rose and Scorpius falling in love but that everyone got married and stuff. But then I read about the epilouge and read this again and it makes sense.
 
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squidzinkpen said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 12:02 pm:
If someone had written something like this, would it be plagiarism? Not just like, but having Rose and Scorpius together.
 
InvisibleNerdGirl replied...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 8:37 pm :
I don't think so, 'cuz it's just the same idea, and it's a pretty broad idea too. Like your story with Rose and Scorpius (which is really good by the way :D) is actually lots different from this. And it is fanfiction, so you can get away with some copying as it's just for fun. :)
 
InvisibleNerdGirl replied...
Apr. 14, 2011 at 3:20 pm :
(*copying of the original book, I mean, as in using JKR's characters -- not copying of other fan fiction pieces.)
 
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DiamondsIntheGrassThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 12:56 pm:
love the idea, but its just so... abrupt and the characters dont sound like themselves.
 
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kielymarie said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 6:41 pm:
It's very choppy and a little awkward. Also when the characters spoke they didn't sound like themselves. And I don't think it's necessary for Scorpius to list the names of all the people he hangs out with- it's a common amateur mistake.
 
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fireflynightThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 12:05 pm:
Cool. I think it's kind of a funny, cute idea. :P I love this sort of thing.
 
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crzybookworm said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 3:39 am:
Its a little confusing, but I love the idea of the Wesley and Malfoy forbidean love.
 
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Lindsay H. said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 8:10 pm:
It was a very interesting story. a couple of grammer errors, but you should really keep writing. ;)
 
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SocialCollision said...
Jul. 10, 2010 at 3:52 pm:
I like your writing style. I hate what you did to the charactors. It just doesnt fit!
 
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Aileen_PThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 10, 2010 at 1:31 pm:
i'm not sure what to say. it was odd but kinda interesting.:)
 
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iCamillaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 4:00 pm:
This is interesting, but I have to say that it's not really like the book at all.
 
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darkvisions said...
May 25, 2010 at 3:56 pm:
This is a really good idea...I love the Rose-Scorpius/Weasley-Malfoy romance theme...but I think it could have been slightly better. Although there could very well be a change of heart, the fact remains that Malfoys are cold-hearted as a rule. There were also a few errors, such as Malfoy's wife, who is not, in fact, Pansy (refer to book 7). However, the quality of the writing is spectacular, and I loved it, particularly where you described Harry, and other parts as well. I myself am a huge ... (more »)
 
MusicBeyondBeliefThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 25, 2010 at 5:12 pm :
I know I messed up a lot! :|
 
darkvisions replied...
May 25, 2010 at 5:29 pm :
thats fine...the messups are actually what you'd think would happen in the seventh one...but I thought it was amazing anyway, keep writing!!!
 
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