Harry lily & James potter finally meet

September 20, 2009
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Chapter 1
“James, do you think that Serious Black is watching Harry for us?”
“I don’t know maybe Lily, I mean it has been 21 years since we last saw him.”

Meanwhile at Harry & Ginny’s house
“Morning, Ginny.”
“Morning, Harry.”
“Where’s the kids we’re going to be late.”
“Upstairs, still getting ready.”
“James, Lily, Albus, come on we’re going to be late if we don’t leave soon.”

The Potters left for platform nine and three quarters. They met Ron, Hermoine, and Rose when they arrived. The kids took off to go have some fun before the train leaves. Harry’s scar starts to burn but he ignores it. Suddenly He-Who-Can’t-Be-Named appeared to finish off Harry for good.

“Harry get the kids, we’ll keep him distracted.”

Harry went to get the kids, when he did they begged him not to go. He tried to tell them that their parents were in danger and he needed to help them. They wouldn’t let him leave, so finally they watched as Harry fought to protect them. After the fight was over Lily went over to tell them that someone was here to talk to them. They all went to see who it was.

“Who are you, what do you want?”
“Don’t tell me that you forgot about me already.”
“Professor is that you?”
“Yes Ronald it is.”
“Dumbledore oh it is so good to see you.”
The kids got onto the train and Serious came into the room that they were in. Their parents and Dumbledore were on their way to Harry’s and Ginny’s house to talk over tea. On the way out of the train they met Hagrid who is the grounds keeper at Hogwarts.
"Hi ya kids, it seems like just yesterday that your parents started school here."
"Hey Lily watch out for Snape and Malfoy."
"Oh I will, I'm not scared of Snape or Malfoy."
"Albus come on don't be a scaredy cat. We don't have all night."

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Alexye This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 5:07 pm
I was excited to read this story when I saw it was a Harry Potter fanfiction. Then, I read it. It is without doubt the worst fanfiction I have ever read. You need to fix your grammar and check your facts from the book. Also, please stop alternating between writing it like it's a screen play and like it's a story.
KentuckyJohnWall11 said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 9:13 pm

Nice writing style, but did you even read the books, a bunch of these people should not be seen beacause...

They is dead

kikigirl101 said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 10:49 am
Yea, sorry I agree with everyone else, this was really weirdly written and it didn't follow any of the books. It was confusing too and some background information would have been greatly appreciated and very much needed. Your writing style is good but it just didn't make much sense to me! Sorry.
Drama_Queen13 said...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 6:01 pm
I'm sorry, this really makes no sense.
Ally25 said...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 3:50 pm
Hey! This was...ok. But verry confusing..and diden't corespond with the books...and some back round info would have been nice.. the way it was writen was ok though. Keep writing.
alice! said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 9:16 am
Confusing.. very confusing..! Doesn't amek sense..1
Laughternchoclate said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 4:40 pm
Yeah this is not great....
udontknowme said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 1:51 pm
i agree to all of the people that hates this because it was too confusing and they wrote too many mistakes
harrypotteraddict said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 11:51 am
I was excited to read this story. I was very differen then what I thought it would be and is by far the worst Harry Potter fan fiction ever! It doesn't even make any sense. It's so dumb!
BlackKitti said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 10:51 am
I completely agree with frdbsstt. I was so excited to read this story and it turns out like this. oh and they don't call dumbledore 'dumbeldore' (and I don't even think that's how you spell it) they call him professor. I don't even thik this story makes sense
suprswimmer said...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 5:37 pm
Please read what frdsbsst said. Now please read it again. If you ever need help figuring out the plot line don't be afraid to email me on Teen Ink and I will help you out! :)
frdsbsstt said...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 8:43 pm
There are a few problems with this story.
1: It's Sirius, not Serious.
2: Voldemort died and Harry's scar stopped hurting for good in the 7th book.
3: There are quite a few grammer errors, and I am not even going to try to point them all out.
4: This story doesn't even make sense.
L.G. Smiles said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 8:29 pm
Hey, good job on completing the first chapter. Have you seen the new movie yet? Anyway, good job, exept for it was really confusing when there is 2 Albus'. Do you know what happens to Dumbledore on the new movie? Who is Rose, I am guessing Ron and Hermoine's daughter?
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