Harry lily & James potter finally meet

September 20, 2009
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Chapter 1
“James, do you think that Serious Black is watching Harry for us?”
“I don’t know maybe Lily, I mean it has been 21 years since we last saw him.”

Meanwhile at Harry & Ginny’s house
“Morning, Ginny.”
“Morning, Harry.”
“Where’s the kids we’re going to be late.”
“Upstairs, still getting ready.”
“James, Lily, Albus, come on we’re going to be late if we don’t leave soon.”

The Potters left for platform nine and three quarters. They met Ron, Hermoine, and Rose when they arrived. The kids took off to go have some fun before the train leaves. Harry’s scar starts to burn but he ignores it. Suddenly He-Who-Can’t-Be-Named appeared to finish off Harry for good.

“Harry get the kids, we’ll keep him distracted.”

Harry went to get the kids, when he did they begged him not to go. He tried to tell them that their parents were in danger and he needed to help them. They wouldn’t let him leave, so finally they watched as Harry fought to protect them. After the fight was over Lily went over to tell them that someone was here to talk to them. They all went to see who it was.

“Who are you, what do you want?”
“Don’t tell me that you forgot about me already.”
“Professor is that you?”
“Yes Ronald it is.”
“Dumbledore oh it is so good to see you.”
The kids got onto the train and Serious came into the room that they were in. Their parents and Dumbledore were on their way to Harry’s and Ginny’s house to talk over tea. On the way out of the train they met Hagrid who is the grounds keeper at Hogwarts.
"Hi ya kids, it seems like just yesterday that your parents started school here."
"Hey Lily watch out for Snape and Malfoy."
"Oh I will, I'm not scared of Snape or Malfoy."
"Albus come on don't be a scaredy cat. We don't have all night."

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Artistic_Geek_Roo_10This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 29 at 8:08 pm
Sorry, but 98% of the characters in this wouldn't be born yet or they would be dead... I'm not entirely sure if you finished the series or not. Better luck next time!
godistheonetruekingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 5 at 5:30 pm
I was a little confused too but if you need any help I'm here
illuminaughty_phandom said...
Mar. 17, 2016 at 11:17 am
As everyone else commented, this was a bit confusing. But I give you a medal for effort :)
HuntShot732 said...
Oct. 1, 2015 at 6:34 pm
Yeah. It was a bit confusing.
fahsnf said...
Jun. 19, 2015 at 6:05 pm
Serious Black..... Seems legit
Buurrry said...
Jan. 8, 2014 at 12:24 pm
So Harry had kids before he even went to hogwarts?
freeday15 replied...
Apr. 5, 2014 at 5:31 pm
this made NO sense at all
Buurrry said...
Oct. 30, 2013 at 12:34 pm
How can you have Voldomort come back to light without even explaining it?!?!?!? Come on. He's dead. Atlest come up with a new villan.
Zozey said...
Feb. 23, 2013 at 12:51 pm
Oh and I understood that some of the names in this were actually the kids, but you might want to make that more specfic. 
Zozey said...
Feb. 23, 2013 at 12:47 pm
Okay so at first I thought you were in the train station of Harry's dream and they were watching over Harry and his kids. Then you simply confused me. Everything seemed rushed like you were writing it in only an hour or something. This has a really good idea i think, but right now it is only an outline. You need to specifiy who is talking for one.  Also explain what is happening, don't just have it happen. This could be really good, don't give up!
RainbowStriker said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 6:37 pm
The was completely messed up. Dumbledore and Harry's parents ar dead. It makes no sense.
J1029 said...
Jun. 4, 2012 at 11:28 am
I didn't like it. It made no sense. Voldemort was dead and the plot was out there. Don't give up on writing just work out the major details.
Anni45 said...
Jun. 2, 2012 at 11:03 pm
I don't understand it. How can James and Lily be alive, and Harry and Ginny are married and have kids already? I think if you were going to write it like that you would write a part of it that is transitioning, like "5 years later" because then it might not be as confusing.
JustALittleBitOfMe said...
May 31, 2012 at 11:19 am
I really dont get this. The plot of the story is rash and i dont think you thought about this before you wrote it. Better luck next time.
writer5 said...
Apr. 12, 2012 at 12:49 pm
lily ( harrys mom) has to be dead or else harry wouldnt have the protection of the love to be survive and also so many other people in this are dead!
Dreamr This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 10:08 am
Ok, just a couple points. This could work as maybe an outline, but remember your commas, periods, and question marks. Add emotion. Smooth out your dialouge, and you might wanna explain, if all the dead come back to life
msoledadvc said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 12:34 pm
Mmm I didn't get it. It's good but I think it still needs work.
Adnama said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 9:43 am
I didn't quite catch on.  It was a little confusing.  I am a huge fan of the Harry Potter Series and I know all of the characters. I just don't think that this was put together quite right.
River.Beaudelaire said...
Oct. 6, 2011 at 12:22 pm

Hey, I think that this a superb attempt at fan fiction. However, there were a few issues with this piece. I think the curx of the actual idea was well thoguht out but on the other hand the way you presented it was a tad confusing. Contrary to other comments, I dont believe it is a crime to change the events in the actual book. Also, in my opinion, what made it so difficult to interpret was the dialogue. Maybe a more effective method of presenting your idea would be choose a distinct narrator ... (more »)

writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 1:10 pm
nightstalker part three, four, and five is now out! Go check it out if you liked the first and second! :)(:
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