The Monster Inside (Preface)

April 2, 2009
By Amanda Bereswill BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
Amanda Bereswill BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Everyone expirences nightmares sometimes, but no one really lives them out. Although they may think they do, humans are lucky that way. Not me. I don’t even sleep, and I have nightmares.

All day and all night, I am plagued with what I have done in the past, what I may do in the future. Death, killing, blood. All of the blood! I can see it running so clearly through the veins of the humans.

Why I punish myself I don’t know. Many of my kind don’t do this to themselves, don’t let the blood tear at their insides so they can stay ‘good.’ Even if on the outside I may appear normal, on the inside I remain the same. A monster.

The author's comments:
I am writing a novel and this is the preface. I thought I would put it up for people other than my friends to see so I could get more feedback.

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on Apr. 9 2009 at 1:49 am
Wickedgirl95 SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
We may not talk everyday, we may not live next door, but true friends are there they are the ones that think of you and care how you are doing.

you put it up! yay! i thought it was good and makes people think and want to read more!

on Apr. 9 2009 at 1:14 am
omgomgomg!!!!! this is ur twifanfiction!!!!! i <3 this, they gotta post it!!!!! come on,ppl, its reallllllly good! vote vote vote!!!!!


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