Your Piece of Advice

November 18, 2008
By Myers Rhoad, Charleston, SC

I never listened to anything that you told me. But now I think that I should.
You once told me that there were only three deadly weapons on this earth. And that they were a gun, a sword, and your heart. I called you bluff about the last one. "Your heart? Mind over matter." I smirked.
Years pasted. You were right. You think that it is all mind over matter. And that you can control your emotions. And that your heart is just a muscle. And that no pain can come from emotions. You think that it doesn't hurt. You're wrong. "You heart always wins"

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This article has 4 comments.

lizzg said...
on May. 31 2009 at 8:23 pm
good job

on Mar. 27 2009 at 8:54 pm
xlacrossex22 GOLD, Glenshaw, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
“I laugh, I love, I hope, I try, I hurt, I need, I fear, I cry. And I know you do the same things too, So we're really not that different, me and you.” ~Colin Raye~

Short, sweet, and sooo true! I really liked it. Good job.

on Mar. 24 2009 at 12:54 am
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

You wrote "you" a lot when it was supposed to be "your".

just3words said...
on Nov. 24 2008 at 4:32 am
This i can completely agree with. I love the simplicity of it.


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