Your Piece of Advice

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I never listened to anything that you told me. But now I think that I should.
You once told me that there were only three deadly weapons on this earth. And that they were a gun, a sword, and your heart. I called you bluff about the last one. "Your heart? Mind over matter." I smirked.
Years pasted. You were right. You think that it is all mind over matter. And that you can control your emotions. And that your heart is just a muscle. And that no pain can come from emotions. You think that it doesn't hurt. You're wrong. "You heart always wins"





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lizzg said...
May 31, 2009 at 8:23 pm
good job
 
xlacrossex22 said...
Mar. 27, 2009 at 8:54 pm
Short, sweet, and sooo true! I really liked it. Good job.
 
Amanda B. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 24, 2009 at 12:54 am
You wrote "you" a lot when it was supposed to be "your".
 
just3words said...
Nov. 24, 2008 at 4:32 am
This i can completely agree with. I love the simplicity of it.
 
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