be careful little eyes what you see

September 11, 2013
We all look into the world and see things not one person should see. We violence and hatred, war and maybe peace. Love, life, and death. The things we see can ruin us, or they could make us rich. We fight an unending battle. to keep our sights pure.
Just be careful little eyes what you see. for if you don't that little sight can change your life forever.

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brittbritt101 said...
Nov. 2, 2013 at 9:32 am
i cant wait to read your book. sis you are an amazing person and i hope one day you will be up in the big leagues of writing love you
TanazMasaba This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 25, 2013 at 2:36 am
Hey there beth...I am tanaz from the buddy about your story...Its a very short article but a well written article no doubt...just becareful of some small grammar and tense and spelling errors okay? Other than that I found no problems. You're pretty good writer so keep on writing :) *thumbs up*
brb00bookworm replied...
Dec. 18, 2013 at 1:29 pm
thanks i like to think i'm a good writer and it is nice to hear that from someone other than my older sister brittbritt101
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