my love... the vampire

August 22, 2008
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The horn was loud as we drove through the tunnel. The wind was hitting us faster than a bullet. Our screams were louder than they've ever been. The car spun... so did we. "HELP!!!" I screamed. I couldn't tell you how scary... and fun it was. The car screeched. I stared at him trying to remember his face. His face was different. Thoses beutiful blue eyes of his had turned black in the darkness of the street. His face was white. Where did my love go? Noticing I was staring at him he turned to me. "What's wrong?" He asked. "Nothing. You just look ... different." I couldn't look at him. My head turned to my side of the convertible. In the road was a man. I stared at him and saw the simalar features of my love. I turned to the driver seat... he was gone! When I turned once again to look at the man he was at my door. Our noses touched and he stared into my frightened eyes. "I love you." He whispered into my ear... he swiftly got into the car and hit the gas. We were going off a cliff!!! "Im not going to let you die." "Whats happening????" I asked then my feet were touching nothing but air! His hand was grasping a branch... and me!
"Wake up!!!!!!!!"
"HUH?????" I stared at my room. It was just a dream... really?





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CrazedWriter said...
Sept. 6, 2008 at 1:59 pm
Aside from the grammar, this was very good.
 
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