A Twist In Romance

August 16, 2008
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I was slow dancing with my crush. I noticed his smile and his hand placement on my hips. I was about to tell him that I loved him when he pulled away, brought a stranger over and said, “Have you met my boyfriend?" I stood stunned seeing the happy couple smiling blissfully at me.





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Leann13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 7, 2010 at 7:05 pm
WHAT THE*???? Haha is this true??
 
innergenious745 said...
Mar. 7, 2009 at 5:52 pm
I think it was a little short. I guess that sort of works though since it was such a shock, but i think it would work better as an ending to a story, next time build up to it, so that it's more of a shock to the reader. Make us as shocked as you were. But i do like the twist,i think it's interesting.
 
megan b said...
Aug. 28, 2008 at 10:13 pm
Are they gay?If tey are, I'm completley
fine with it,my mom's gay!
 
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