A Twist In Romance

August 16, 2008
By Alison Neshek, Hartland, WI

I was slow dancing with my crush. I noticed his smile and his hand placement on my hips. I was about to tell him that I loved him when he pulled away, brought a stranger over and said, “Have you met my boyfriend?" I stood stunned seeing the happy couple smiling blissfully at me.



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Leann14 GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 7:05 pm
Leann14 GOLD, DeGraff, Ohio
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WHAT THE*???? Haha is this true??

on Mar. 7 2009 at 5:52 pm
Author_ConstantineSeries GOLD, Richmond, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“Reading without thinking is nothing, for a book is less important for what it says than for what it makes you think.”

I think it was a little short. I guess that sort of works though since it was such a shock, but i think it would work better as an ending to a story, next time build up to it, so that it's more of a shock to the reader. Make us as shocked as you were. But i do like the twist,i think it's interesting.

megan b said...
on Aug. 28 2008 at 10:13 pm
Are they gay?If tey are, I'm completley

fine with it,my mom's gay!


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