First Rainfall This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

   I amawakened by the sound of trees rustling and thrashing againstmy window. The branches scratch against the screen, like a catscratching a wooden board. All of a sudden there is a noise sointense it shakes my whole house like an earthquake. It makesmy heart skip a beat and my body shiver. Scared, I hide underthe soft covers. Cautiously, I get out of bed to take a lookoutside to see what caused the ruckus. As I open the poorlypainted shade a streak of lightning lights up the sky, and Ifelt like a deer caught in a car's headlights. Rain beatsagainst my window pane.

The rain finally calms and thedrizzle sounds like a stream sweeping quietly in the woods. Iopen my window to see drops of left-over rain fall from thegutter into the puddles below. The outdoors smells like thefirst day of summer, when the flowers start to bloom. I wantto touch the rain, so I reach my pale arm through the windowand let the cold rain drizzle into my hand; it sends a tinglysensation through my body, leaving goose bumps. I sit in mybrown, squeaky rocker and listen to the sound of the wind asit swishes leaves on the damp, cold grass. I hear littlecreatures in the bushes below my window, crawling, looking forshelter from the wicked storm. I leave my window slightly openas I go back to sleep, and listen to the rain drip slowly asit puts my soul at ease.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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