How Bitterly Sweet?

August 8, 2012
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a. Do you know where we are going?
B. somewhere special
a. What do you mean by special?
B. you'll find out in a few minutes.
a. How far are we?
B. Hm... A far way.
a. (laugh) We've been running for ages!
B. Only for a few minutes.
a. It's been an hour! Listen, can we please stop (slows down to a walk and tries to catch breathe).
B. (turns around and grabs a's hand) It's only been twenty minutes. Come on we haven't got far to go. You're going to be in awe when we get there.
a. But this place is already beautiful enough isn't it?
B. I want things to be perfect.
a. Define perfect.
B. (grabs out phone) Have no reception, I can't look it -
a. No. Your perfect. What does it mean to you?
B. Hm-mm... Well that is hard to explain.
a. (raises eyebrow) Answer. Because why would have brought me out here for?
B. Ah... OK, we'll reach the place then I'll answer.
(B pulls a's arm)
a. NO. I want an answer.
B. Uhh... Can we compromise?
a. for what?
(B leans over throws a over the shoulder)
a. *scream* Put me down, this is not compromising.
B. I am. I'm going to give you my answer while we get there.
a. I don't like this. You're going to be squashed by my lard-a**.
B. One: Realising that you are just right in every way to me no matter what. Two: The surroundings are absolutely beautiful, calm, etc.
a. you're losing grip
B. Oh sorry. Three: um... (puts a down) For you to say 'I love you' back to me when I do this... (leans over towards a)
a. (blushes) Oh my, this is perfect. (leaning in towards B)
(B wraps arm around a's neck and gives a noogie)

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Akmal_Knight said...
Aug. 13, 2012 at 3:54 pm
haha cool thanks for looking at it! Really appreciated. I'm only quite new to the writing biz but from what you say really reflects on my personality. Haha thanks again! :)
Dynamo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 13, 2012 at 9:45 am
Completely random and imaginary. Hmmm..could do fro a new perspective. Nice, though
AlwaysAbditive said...
Aug. 13, 2012 at 9:27 am
It's creative but a little too unorganized for me. The writing style is crazy but I think the idea is cute.
. said...
Aug. 8, 2012 at 5:37 pm
This is great!!! hahahahaha. I hope that you post more stuff soon :)
Akmal_Knight replied...
Aug. 9, 2012 at 5:29 am
Thanks! haha yeah, pretty random huh!
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