His Love for Her

June 27, 2008
By Anna Miller, Phillips, WI

The glowing of her eyes pulls me in. I try to take a breath, but the air feels lighter than it should. I can’t feel the ground I’m standing on, and the rain pouring down on us pulls me into holding her. I am no longer in control, not my mind at least. She gives me a heavy look that sinks deep into me and gives me a new feeling. A feeling of risk, security, being safe, love, wildness, and comforting all at once. I had never felt it… and I knew only she could give me this feeling. I didn’t want to leave this moment, I wanted it to be the very second our lips started to touch forever… The moment is frozen and I feel nothing but her and nothing else matters. She is not just a girl. Not just someone perfect for me. She is this moment in time. She is the love inside of me for anything I’ve ever had. I will never lose her, and never let her lose me.

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This article has 2 comments.

janey said...
on Aug. 11 2008 at 3:52 am
wow...that is such a touching story, it sends shivers through me

bobby_boe said...
on Aug. 11 2008 at 3:51 am
amazing...i give it a five star

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