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I am standing on the corner, hesitant, waiting for the beauty that maybe will come for me. Vulnerable, perhaps, behind my black glasses and pearled ears, zits and braces. The cars whiz past me, carriages smoothly gliding, and I watch the people. I watch the men driving alone, the older girls with their shiny, straightened hair and perky breasts, the women barely visible behind piles of groceries, the older couples. I watch these people’s hands. They clutch cigarettes, coffees, soda cans, each other.

I watch their faces, lined with sorrow and laughter, lined with makeup and the crusty remnants of sleep. I watch these people, these strangers driving by me, not seeing me, and I think how funny it is that they sit in their thrones of leather and vinyl, thinking they are alone, but there, there I am, watching them, trying to read their pasts, their presents, their futures, without tarot cards, thinking how odd it is to see human souls encased in glass and steel, private tragedies driving to some unknown destination.

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wordlover27VIP said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 11:32 am:

I love how you took something so simple and made it breathtakingly beautiful :)

 
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RiverSongVIP said...
May 2, 2011 at 6:45 pm:

Beautiful! Five stars!

 
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Sara I. said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 3:22 pm:

This is wonderful.

 
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bubj98 said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 11:03 pm:

amazing.i think its great how you think of things.i feel the same way

 
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crazypoetgirl18 said...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 8:10 pm:

This is really a beautiful piece, and a good concept. I have similar feelings about phone books. There are names laid out in front of you, and you can only imagine the connections they have to each other or the kind of lives they lead...

 
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Sliva23 said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 8:06 am:

I truely love this....it actually made me think and then cry for some unknown reason

 
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eternalsunset said...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 11:11 pm:

This is truly Beautiful. Keep Writing!

 
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mustlovemuse said...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 3:12 pm:

Awesome. Very well written... the flow of the words you chose is incredible. :)

 
Hi-5_Girl replied...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 6:48 pm :

I too enjoy watching people driving by. Sometimes I even make up life stories for them. Again I'll say what everyone else here is saying, your words flowed so well it made me want to keep reading even though this piece is so short. Bravo!

~

 
Hi-5_Girl replied...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 6:49 pm :

This was not intended to be added on to mustlovemuse's comment. :) I hit the wrong button by mistake.

~The Hi-5 Girl

 
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rayj095 said...
May 15, 2010 at 6:45 pm:

Awesomee! Very short and puts a good point out there :)

 
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Chingu said...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 9:35 pm:

Incredible! I've had the same thoughts, but you put them into words with grace and beauty. Keep on writing!

 
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Kkrazy said...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 8:32 pm:

WOW!

 
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toxic_energy said...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 10:13 pm:

Amazing, really.

 
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samidvd96 said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 11:47 am:

Wow that's exactly how I feel when i'm around people

 
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Ethershine said...
Dec. 12, 2009 at 10:49 am:

something I think about all the time. I love just sitting there and wondering what a stranger is thinking, where he's going, what his life is about, etc.
it flows well. Nice choice of vocabulary.

 
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KaterinaYager said...
Aug. 21, 2009 at 7:15 pm:

I think about that all the time.

 
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bookworm97 said...
Jul. 2, 2009 at 2:15 am:

short and very intresting to read! Thanks for posting it!

 
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Nicki N. said...
Jul. 2, 2009 at 12:08 am:

I love this! It just screams New York City.

 
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bookaddict said...
Jun. 17, 2009 at 10:58 pm:

It's short...and sweet...and makes an interesting point! Bravo! Keep it up!

 
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Hannah R. said...
Jun. 14, 2009 at 5:48 am:

this is a great little story you have here. i can totally relate to it and i think many others can as well, one thing that makes it so good.

 
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MaxWayland567 said...
Jun. 11, 2009 at 1:07 am:

This is great! Short and sweet, as some may say! It reflects to what i feel sometimes, watching people pass by as i try to read their feelings.
Keep up the great work!

 
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musicislife13 said...
Jun. 3, 2009 at 4:14 am:

I loved this!! :)It just relates to how I am sometimes...I just see people at the store or at an intersection or something, and they don't see me back...and I try to think of what kind of person they are. It's weird to think about how many people in the world are strangers to us!! Anywho...Keep it up! Nice work!! :)

 
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kittykat123 said...
May 28, 2009 at 9:46 pm:

short but very good!!!!!! keep up the good work!!! :)

 
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angelbrat13 said...
May 11, 2009 at 9:55 pm:

i really liked it..it was touching and a lot said in a short time. keep writing! =)

 
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SickImageVIP said...
May 11, 2009 at 9:20 pm:

"...and the crusty remnants of sleep".
:]

 
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xDarithz said...
May 9, 2009 at 1:09 pm:

Absolutely profound. This piece is really great! Can u read mine?

 
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uniquelysilent said...
May 5, 2009 at 8:39 pm:

That was awesome

 
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miawrites said...
Aug. 14, 2008 at 6:48 pm:

The title of your story really caught my eye. I love it when people take the time to come up with good titles. And though your story's really short, I really liked it. It's sort of striking.

I'm sorry I don't have much critique. I'm not a professional, just an aspiring author like yourself. But anyway, great job!

 
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