The Struggle

May 23, 2012
By StongerMe SILVER, Denver, Colorado
StongerMe SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Today is the first day of the rest of your life....make it count" <3

Bubbles rose up as I began to lose sight of the shore. My lungs closed in on me as I was dragged to the oceann floor. The wave was too over powering and I was pulled even farther down under. When I finally surfaced to the top another wave hit me.Gallaons and gallons of water poured into my mouth. A crack reverberated as another wave crashed down on me. A slow and sharp pain ran all over my body. Opening my eyes all I could see was a black and blue blur surrounding me. I was on my last breathe. I was giving up. Letting the waves carry my body out to sea for all eternity. Suddenly I felt strong and sturdy hands weeding me out from the monstrous ocean.

The author's comments:
I got my inspiration to write this from a movie I watched not to long ago.

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