The voice.......

March 31, 2012
By earthhashope SILVER, Earth, Other
earthhashope SILVER, Earth, Other
9 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
You alone are enough. You don't have to prove yourself to anybody.
Trust dreams. Trust your heart. Trust your story.
Earth without trees is like pizza without cheese!!!
Humanity is like an ocean. If one drop gets polluted, the entire ocean doesn't.


Then I heard it. The pleasant voice which pierced the inner depths of my soul. Which tore my heart apart with longing. Sweet voice which seemed to tame the beast of revenge inside me. I shut my eyes and surrendered to its commands. It pulled me closer and closer like a helpless piece of iron being pulled towards an incredibly strong magnet. It allured me to come nearer, promising a happy future in the pure white blanket of peace and joy. Oh, the amour, the bliss, the contentment. My rage seemed like a harmless fly, droning on monotonously in some forgotten part of my limp anima. The only thing which burned in my physique and held up my chassis was the delectation, the boundless beatitude I felt. It completed me, made me whole, promising no pain or sorrow. It was the quintessence of my bare survival. I was a free bird. My soul was beautiful, perfect, a whisper in the wind. It seemed to have a voice of its own, beseeching me to follow. And I did. I followed it to the ultimate serenity……….
The disremembered part of me seemed to squirm under some alien pressure. The renewed strength in me seemed to fight back. I pushed against the strange encumbrance, as hard as I could. But it was even more forceful. I kicked and thrashed, but it was in vain……..I was slipping into darkness, my perpetual and ceaseless bliss evaporating into steam….


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on Jul. 23 2012 at 10:13 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

The details in this are amazing. I love the words are beaurtiful, yet sad. It's a bit confusing at times, and I'm not a fan of the layout, but I think overall, you did a good job. Hope you keep writing. :)

on Jul. 19 2012 at 7:30 am
earthhashope SILVER, Earth, Other
9 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
You alone are enough. You don't have to prove yourself to anybody.
Trust dreams. Trust your heart. Trust your story.
Earth without trees is like pizza without cheese!!!
Humanity is like an ocean. If one drop gets polluted, the entire ocean doesn't.

Thanks!!!! :)

on Jun. 28 2012 at 8:39 am
earthhashope SILVER, Earth, Other
9 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
You alone are enough. You don't have to prove yourself to anybody.
Trust dreams. Trust your heart. Trust your story.
Earth without trees is like pizza without cheese!!!
Humanity is like an ocean. If one drop gets polluted, the entire ocean doesn't.

Thank you!!!

:)


on Jun. 9 2012 at 9:51 am
Mantequilla SILVER, Eagan, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet. This is awesome. I love the descriptions and such. I feel this way a lot after school. It's like trying to retain anger for 2 hours and then listening to your favorite songs....it all just goes away. This is very good. :) 5/5

 


on Apr. 7 2012 at 1:57 am
SweetSandyFlower GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
Not everyone has to go to college because ..hello!.. PIZZAS DONT DELIVER THEMSELVES!!!!

o my!! Very intreaging(sp?). I love to idea!! I better get a copy of this novel when it is published! :)

4/5 stars ****



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