Navy

January 17, 2008
By Gina Koutnik, Hoffman Estates, IL

I wish you didn’t have to go. But I know you want to do something with your life. I will miss you so much. But I wish you didn’t have to go to the navy. Every time I think about you going it makes but scared. I’m scared that I won’t see you again. Everyone says you will be alright I hope that’s true. Well now that navy has the best guy cousin I have ever had. I’ll try not to cry. I know you will be back soon. I’ll miss you and stay safe.


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LastChapter said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 1:08 am
LastChapter, Hempstead, New York
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Favorite Quote:
(couldn't think of anything better at the time) "Take the first step in faith. You don't have to see the whole staircase, just take the first step."-Dr.Martin Luther King Jr.

i felt like you were really detatched when you wrote this. it didn't feel like you were truly upset, it sounded like you were listing simple, diagnosed feelings straight from a dictionary, not describing or confronting anything REAL you might've felt. i'm sorry, but i didn't buy it.


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