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"show me."
"No."
"Show me...please?"
"No."
"Why not?"
"You'll cry and hate me."
"I wont."
"You would... i know you would."
"Please show me..."
Reluctatly he showed her...
She looked and only saw...
His face betrayed no emtion...
"I love you."
"Really?"
"Yes."
"I love you too!"

And all becuase he showed her...





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JennaDilynn said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 8:28 pm
showed her what????????????????
 
JulesHenry replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 6:42 am
leaving it up to your imagination x
 
Mislead replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 11:48 am
but that means the story can be anything...
 
JulesHenry replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 11:50 am
its the point of trust, whether two people can trust each other despite having secrets x
 
Mislead replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 11:53 am
but thats just it. what secret is he hiding? like what did you picture?
 
JulesHenry replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 11:55 am
well originally it was scars from where he had cut himself, but when i was writting it it became very personal so i changed it so the reader could decide what secrets two people may have that challenges their trust x
 
Mislead replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 11:57 am
wow. that would have been a really ood idea
 
Mislead replied...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 11:57 am
***good***
 
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