Show Me

January 21, 2011
By JulesHenry PLATINUM, Manchester, Other
JulesHenry PLATINUM, Manchester, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Tears you may cry....but you shall no drown, so dry off and laugh once more."


"show me."
"No."
"Show me...please?"
"No."
"Why not?"
"You'll cry and hate me."
"I wont."
"You would... i know you would."
"Please show me..."
Reluctatly he showed her...
She looked and only saw...
His face betrayed no emtion...
"I love you."
"Really?"
"Yes."
"I love you too!"

And all becuase he showed her...



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on Jan. 23 2011 at 11:57 am
KaylynVictoria SILVER, Breaux Bridge, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Always keep your head up so you never have an excuse to look down at yourself(:

***good***

on Jan. 23 2011 at 11:57 am
KaylynVictoria SILVER, Breaux Bridge, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Always keep your head up so you never have an excuse to look down at yourself(:

wow. that would have been a really ood idea

on Jan. 23 2011 at 11:55 am
JulesHenry PLATINUM, Manchester, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Tears you may cry....but you shall no drown, so dry off and laugh once more."

well originally it was scars from where he had cut himself, but when i was writting it it became very personal so i changed it so the reader could decide what secrets two people may have that challenges their trust x

on Jan. 23 2011 at 11:53 am
KaylynVictoria SILVER, Breaux Bridge, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Always keep your head up so you never have an excuse to look down at yourself(:

but thats just it. what secret is he hiding? like what did you picture?

on Jan. 23 2011 at 11:50 am
JulesHenry PLATINUM, Manchester, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Tears you may cry....but you shall no drown, so dry off and laugh once more."

its the point of trust, whether two people can trust each other despite having secrets x

on Jan. 23 2011 at 11:48 am
KaylynVictoria SILVER, Breaux Bridge, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Always keep your head up so you never have an excuse to look down at yourself(:

but that means the story can be anything...

on Jan. 23 2011 at 6:42 am
JulesHenry PLATINUM, Manchester, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Tears you may cry....but you shall no drown, so dry off and laugh once more."

leaving it up to your imagination x

on Jan. 22 2011 at 8:28 pm
KaylynVictoria SILVER, Breaux Bridge, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Always keep your head up so you never have an excuse to look down at yourself(:

showed her what????????????????


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