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Red is the color I turned when Mark Adams first kissed me on the cheek. I said I most certainly did not like him, and he said he could prove I was lying. He knew a special test. By changing colors I failed the test, and he couldn’t stop laughing.

Orange was the color of our fingertips when we finished a family-sized bag of Cheetos. We stayed up all night watching “Star Wars” movies. Mark couldn’t believe I’d never seen a George Lucas film. We didn’t eat popcorn because he had lost his popcorn-popping privileges. He didn’t tell me why; he just said it was a dark day in the Adams household.

Yellow daffodils were pushing up from the ground when he took me to the park, saying we must “celebrate spring.” He brought an enormous red kite, the kind that has a tail with ribbons. As we sat in the grass, he undid the sun-colored ribbon in my brown hair, adding it to the tail of the kite. We ran all around the park to keep our kite flying, the ribbons waving.

Green was the color of Mark’s face after we rode the biggest roller coaster in the amusement park. He’s afraid of them, but he rode it anyway to prove that he was “man enough,” I guess. When the ride was over, he dashed to the nearest trash can, emptying his stomach. So much for manhood. I couldn’t stop laughing. That is, until he said if I didn’t stop, he’d kiss me on the mouth. Barf kiss: gross!

Blue envelopes are tied up with string in a shoebox under my bed. Love letters Mark left in my locker, signed, “Your secret admirer, Mark.” I told him signing his name defeated the purpose of a secret admirer, but he said he didn’t care.

Indigo ink on the palm of his hand where he wrote “I love you.” I kissed his palm, and all of his fingers, before settling on his mouth.

Violet roses I received a week before our anniversary. We never exchanged gifts on that day. He said red ones were overdone. “Besides,” he added, “violet is the color of passion.” He waggled his eyebrows, and I laughed, hitting him lightly on the arm.

The colors of the rainbow are the ties that bring Mark and me together. Growing ever stronger, they portray our love.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Aduke9This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 5 at 10:37 pm:
Beautiful. A wonderful romance.
 
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corazon.de.cieloThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 5 at 9:21 pm:
I absolutely loved this story! I'm a huge fan of colors and their roles in stories and you nailed that in this one. Keep writing, please!
 
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polkaolkadots said...
Apr. 13 at 3:27 am:
that was so beautiful. i wish everyday could be that colorful
 
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Tori W. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 22 at 12:04 pm:
The imagery ruled this article. I love it.
 
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mollybThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 22 at 10:57 am:
This is amazing! Great work, I loved it!
 
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Pixie chic said...
Mar. 22 at 10:19 am:
This is beautiful and sweet! Nice job.
 
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StandStrongThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 29 at 1:07 pm:
This is beautiful(:
 
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otherpoetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 7 at 6:13 pm:
This made me smile, so sweet, so touching, great job!
 
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aem312This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 7 at 5:40 pm:
I really like this. The concept was beautiful. I loved the colors.
 
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james14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 7 at 2:14 pm:
This is so gorgeous!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!
 
james14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 7 at 2:15 pm :
I also LOVE the picture!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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Lillie M. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 7 at 7:28 am:
That's gorgeous and such a beautiful way of describing love. . .
 
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DinaTheDinasaurThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 16 at 4:21 pm:
I'm really not a fan of romance but this was really well done!
 
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Dakota_Love_LeFeyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 16 at 3:15 pm:
this story is so beautiful i love it
 
3mo_sw33tsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 7 at 5:36 pm :
I agree:) It made me smile as I imagined a young couple truly in love:) It filled my cheeks with warmth and delight. Towards the end, I nearly began to cry. I was so sad....well...I suppose in a GOOD way if you know what I mean:)
 
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Def_Leppard_fan120This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 16 at 12:21 am:
Come check out my profile and read my articles when you can comment on what you thought about the story. Thank you for your time
 
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brainiacThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 6:00 pm:

Awesome

 

 
monkeyfaceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 25, 2011 at 1:41 pm :
Ths is such a great touching and happy story adore it.
 
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Kitty.Meow.DalyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 11:40 am:
Awww :) Happy endings <3
 
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ashleynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 5:19 pm:

Awwww that's soo cute....wish it wasn't fiction! (: It's really good (:

 

 
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lrshapThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 4:50 pm:
so So SO SO SO sweet! LOVE it love
 
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ChocoMintThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 4:42 pm:
I know I'm the 320th person to comment on this, but you really did an amazing job. I love the original idea of using colors to tie two people together. I also love how your article is "non-cliched," so to speak. So many romance articles on this website have the same conflicts, the same ideas, the same worn out settings and plots. It gets pretty boring. Thanks for you article. It really added some color and spice to Teen Ink.  =+)  Keep on writing!  <><
 
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Dancingwriter said...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 12:51 am:
I love how you made all the colors mix in with the romance of Mark and the main character. Keep writing =)
 
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luv2run2299This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 20, 2011 at 3:59 pm:
This was so good. I loved how all the colors corresponded to what the two of them did together. Very clever and creative. KEEP WRITING! 
 
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WillHug4MoneyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 20, 2011 at 11:26 am:
This is so sweet and clever!! I love how you came up for different things for different colors. Love it, great job!!
 
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Victoria.SThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 5:10 pm:
This is so cute and sweet! I love this, dont stop writing ;)
 
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PumpkinscoutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 7:07 pm:
This is really sweet. The ending was a tad bit bumpy in my opinion, but I thought the story itself was so cute and fun. Great color theme use and just generally well-written.
 
AurelieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 1:05 am :
Same- great job with the story, but I feel like you could work on the ending a little more. Maybe change it around a bit so that the end statement isn't as obvious. 
 
SmileyFace13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 20, 2011 at 5:59 pm :
I agree :) excellent story beautifully ending but the ending didnt  fit well. the rest was cute but not very corny and the end was extremely corny. amazing story still :)
 
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KenyaLove41This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 5:08 pm:
this is one of th sweetest, magical, and magnifincent love stories i've ever read and thats saying something since i usaully dont like love stories but this so so amazing. i love love love ur writng and how you use the color to describe everything i could practically see everthing. ur amazing keep on writng:)<3
 
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W. said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 8:15 pm:
I really liked this!! i kept thinking the last color would be white because I thought theyd get married in the end and white would be the color of her wedding dress hehe.   Great story  five stars all the way! 
 
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Norma-Bernard said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 5:05 pm:
This is beautiful. It brought tear to my eyes and hope to my heart that some day, I can have what you and Mark have. You have a gift. I hope you read this to him. It clearly shows how much you love him. Keep writing :)
 
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GoldenEagleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 2:27 pm:
Splendid writing. Salute was the expression and orange was the color of reverence in appreciation of this article. Hats off. Keep writing.
 
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steroids said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 8:09 am:

his may be a late response but atleast im writing, this is amazinnng thi can explain true love :D

 

 
steroids replied...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 8:11 am :
i meant: this*
 
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singingwriter14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 2:14 pm:
This is really sweet. I love how you used the colors!! :-)
 
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titangods31 said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 4:48 pm:

This is so sweet =) love it!

 

 
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RhythmAndRhyme said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 1:05 pm:
Cute! ^-^ Love this.
 
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RanaHewezi1998 said...
Jun. 10, 2011 at 5:41 pm:
that is so cute and u had a lot of passion when writting dat! :)
 
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May 19, 2011 at 7:55 pm:

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llamachick said...
May 13, 2011 at 12:57 pm:
This is very well written i enjoyed it very much!
 
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jake2011This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 7, 2011 at 9:44 pm:
Very nice!  Great piece.  Keep writing them.
 
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twizzlerluva97This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 9:46 pm:

that was so beautiful i am literally crying right now omg wow keep writing

 

 
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RockGirl182This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 8:52 pm:
really sweet, i loved it :) keep writing !!!!!
 
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M_IMLThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 7:27 pm:
This is such a great piece! I love how you used one overlying theme - the colors of the rainbow - to describe something. I wish I had something like this :-) 
 
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Mary said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 7:27 pm:
This is so sweet and simple. You have so much talent! All i can say is thank you so much for sharing it!!!
 
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ChasyaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 6:28 pm:
Very creative. I loved how you used the colours of the rainbow to tell your own little story. It was adorable.
 
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English--LoverThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 5:40 pm:
I liked this really straight forward and simple good job.
 
Writer replied...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 6:02 pm :
this was really good and very tasteful with colors. i never read such an amazing piece
 
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booklover104 said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 12:21 am:

 

awww...this is the sweetest from start to finish. I loved it, it was simple and to he point, you made you point very clear and concise! I love it!!

 
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