One Eyed Feline

September 22, 2010
By FantasyDraka BRONZE, Henegar, Alabama
FantasyDraka BRONZE, Henegar, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
The golden rule do unto others as you would like for them to do unto you.

As I lie down to sleep I catch the faintest smell of cinammon in the air. I close my eyes and see a vision a one eyed feline walking outside my window just staring at me without a purpose. I place my hand against the glass window it rubs up against it wanting an act of compassion. I smile not of pleasure but because I know the story of this cat. It was the pet of a beautiful girl, hair black as the night, eyes green as the trees, beautiful was this girl but not sane of mind, she dug a knife into its the cats right eye and with blooded hands runs out into the woods screaming in horror and dissapearing into the night.

The author's comments:
My cat Maui inspired me to write this. Honestly as i was about to get into bed Maui was walking outside my window and she kept on staring at me and she inspired me.

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on Sep. 26 2010 at 4:12 pm
deus-ex-machina14 BRONZE, Stewartsville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"There are two main tragedies in life. One is not getting what one wants, and the other is getting it." -Oscar Wilde

Mesmerizing beginning, just add more to it. It sounds really interesting and unique. Good job!!


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