Blinded . . Unable to see

June 17, 2010
By ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥


Blinded . . Unable to see
What goes on right in front of me .
Right in front of my eyes that can't visualize the things and people surrounding me .
My eyes are resticted from sight
There for its dim and there's no light . .
For me too see the environment im living in
For me to feel the way others do .
Because they can visualize the things and people surrounding them .
But as for me ?
Im separated from the crowd because I will never be able to see the laughter and love that's being shared around me
Because im living my life Blinded . . and Unable to see


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I love writing !

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on Jul. 9 2010 at 6:15 pm
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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i really enjoyed this! very emotional and i can relate everyone feels like an outcast at one point or another :] keep up the good work!

 


on Jul. 8 2010 at 7:22 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

lol yea thats how it is , thanks =]

on Jul. 8 2010 at 6:38 pm
fearlessalways13 SILVER, N/A, New Hampshire
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Wow! This is beautiful. It's like being an outcast and not living life to its fullest potential; or at least that's how I perceived it. Keep up the great writing! (:

on Jul. 4 2010 at 4:56 pm
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime" ~ Celine Dion
"If you're going to pray don't worry... if you're going to worry don't pray." ~ Mariah Carey

Excellent i can tell u love writing dont stop, please comment my work.

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on Jun. 28 2010 at 2:50 pm
yellowbunny, Windsor, Vermont
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Love it! I like how it's like halfway between prose and poetry. Could you check out my worK?

on Jun. 27 2010 at 3:27 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

nicely written i like the theme!




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