Blinded . . Unable to see

June 17, 2010
Blinded . . Unable to see
What goes on right in front of me .
Right in front of my eyes that can't visualize the things and people surrounding me .
My eyes are resticted from sight
There for its dim and there's no light . .
For me too see the environment im living in
For me to feel the way others do .
Because they can visualize the things and people surrounding them .
But as for me ?
Im separated from the crowd because I will never be able to see the laughter and love that's being shared around me
Because im living my life Blinded . . and Unable to see

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xovanillatwilightxo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 9, 2010 at 6:15 pm

i really enjoyed this! very emotional and i can relate everyone feels like an outcast at one point or another :] keep up the good work!


ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 7:22 pm
lol yea thats how it is , thanks =]
mrsabbyjonas13 said...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 6:38 pm
Wow! This is beautiful. It's like being an outcast and not living life to its fullest potential; or at least that's how I perceived it. Keep up the great writing! (:
LiliofpeaceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 4:56 pm
Excellent i can tell u love writing dont stop, please comment my work.
yellowbunny said...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 2:50 pm
Love it! I like how it's like halfway between prose and poetry. Could you check out my worK?
imrighthereyouknow said...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 3:27 pm
nicely written i like the theme!
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