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Underwater

By , Hollywood, CA
i couldn't believe what i just saw , the epic clown .
I ran up to him and he PUNCHED me in the face .
I ran back to the water and I sunk . Im not sure if thats the way to spell it but it happened . Now i'm on my dads computer up in heaven watching over the clown , he can go DOWN , not UP





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Maniacwriter said...
Jun. 25, 2010 at 5:44 pm
I like that you told such a big story the only thing that i would like to see is a bigger story.
 
gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 23, 2010 at 8:25 am

Haha like the last sentence, good story, expressive.  Nice job. Keep writing!

Btw, will you check out and comment on my work?

 
Kandyz said...
Jun. 23, 2010 at 12:53 am
Its short but using only a few sentences you convey a big story. Good job:)
 
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