Underwater

June 18, 2010
By Anonymous

i couldn't believe what i just saw , the epic clown .
I ran up to him and he PUNCHED me in the face .
I ran back to the water and I sunk . Im not sure if thats the way to spell it but it happened . Now i'm on my dads computer up in heaven watching over the clown , he can go DOWN , not UP


The author's comments:
Its fiction .. :)

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on Jun. 25 2010 at 5:44 pm
Maniacwriter SILVER, Haverhill, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"it is the way you treat the ones you have never met that define who you are as a person"

I like that you told such a big story the only thing that i would like to see is a bigger story.

on Jun. 23 2010 at 8:25 am
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

Haha like the last sentence, good story, expressive.  Nice job. Keep writing!

Btw, will you check out and comment on my work?


korhel said...
on Jun. 23 2010 at 12:53 am
korhel, Rockhampton, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I wish I had the guts to walk away and forget about you... But I can't because I know you won't come after me... And that's what hurts the most."

Its short but using only a few sentences you convey a big story. Good job:)


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