The Loss

March 4, 2010
By Rookie9 SILVER, Monroe, North Carolina
Rookie9 SILVER, Monroe, North Carolina
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"Why? Why why why?" I cried out as I punched the ground. "She was my best friend, my best friend." I yelled as hot tears rolled down my cheeks.
"It's ok Shannon, everything will be ok." My friend Laura said gently.
I shook my head. "No Laura, Rosy was more than my best friend, she was like a sister to me! She knew all my secrets, and she never told them to anyone. She was the best friend anyone could ever have.
Laura let out a sigh. She took her cell phone out of her pocket and dialed a number.
I looked out at the lake, so calm, so peaceful. No one would have ever guessed such a tragic thing took place out there in the middle of the lake. "I'll never forget you Rosy." I whispered.
"John, she's still freaking out." Laura said to the person on the other end of the phone.
I jerked my head in her direction. She was talking to him. It was John who did this, he was the one who took Rosy away forever. “I’ll make John pay.” I yelled.
Laura was silent for a few seconds, than she said, "John you never should have thrown Shannon's rock into the lake."


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on Apr. 13 2010 at 11:38 am
AquariusSunandMoon SILVER, Sublette, Illinois
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Oh oh oh!! ;) For some reason I thought Laura said 'Rosy's rock' which made me think that Rosy was a person and she jumped in to the lake to find her rock and drowned or something ;) Silly me ;)

Rookie9 SILVER said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 3:20 pm
Rookie9 SILVER, Monroe, North Carolina
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Rosy was the rock. :D

on Apr. 12 2010 at 10:30 am
AquariusSunandMoon SILVER, Sublette, Illinois
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Um I don't get it! Did Rosy die?




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