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Shine

Up on the stage in front of a thousand others, I stand with bright lights shining down on me. Everyone’s eyes are fixed on me. Now it is time for me to shine. I keep telling myself I can do this. I start to sing. At the end, everyone applaused. I feel like a star.



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falling-rain said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 10:10 am:
seriously awesome.. i dont sin i play the guitar but i get it:) great job keep writing!:D
 
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iliketac0s said...
May 9, 2010 at 10:04 am:
i really like this, you are an excellent writer! :)
 
amazingkp. replied...
May 11, 2010 at 7:20 am :
Thank you so much! I will look at more of your stuff too. Thanks again! :-)
 
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MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 4:08 pm:
Now I do love this one! This is how I felt my first time singing a solo.. sigh- I love the stage! I like how you used shine and star together without over-doing it
 
amazingkp. replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 7:52 am :
I love the stage too! And thank you for the support! Thanks! 
 
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