Can You Help Her?! ... Anybody??

December 21, 2009
Black clouds creep up over her cold, frostbitten heart. It seems everything she touches turns that dark shade of grey.
She can't remeber the last time she smiled. Maybe never.
She welcomes the feeling of pain, because it's better than feeling nothing at all.
Her eyes are painted black, her cheeks are tear-stained.
The cuts only help for that second. For that one second she feels all the pain ooze down her arm in the form of the sticky, red blood.
But when it's gone, she has nothing. Nothing but her tears. nothing but the pain.
But the pain is better than nothing.
When the pain subsides, her mind fills with all the nothingness that her life has become. An empty balck hole, seeming to never end.
She wants so badly to get out of this vast gulf of black that entraps her heart. She longs for something more in this life. She searches but she doesn't find. All she gets is more pain and hurt.
She asks herself every day if there is more to liffe than this, but she comes up empty handed.
Blood-curdling screams fill her ears and she realizes that it's coming from her.
She screams for someone.
"HELP!" it's all she can sya. All she can think.
She wants it and desperately needs it.
She yearns for a way out, an escape from all the pain that she feels.

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This article has 12 comments. Post your own now! said...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 1:40 pm
This is so amazing! i seriously l o v e i t_(: goodjob.
SilverSnowflakes said...
Sept. 10, 2010 at 1:52 pm


That was really amazing

OffMyRocker... replied...
Sept. 12, 2010 at 3:12 pm
Shmank you
GilmoreGirl said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 4:20 pm

Amazing, amazingly dark. Wow.


P.S. I like your new name,  OffMyRocker.

OffMyRocker... replied...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 1:04 pm
Lol, thanks.
MadAsAHatter... said...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 6:37 pm
Yeah, dark is good.
Talia12 said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 10:38 am
wow...this is so disturbingly beautiful lol...i love it
MadAsAHatter;] replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 5:17 pm
Sank you, I hope you're doing well.:)
Not_so_wicked_witch replied...
May 22, 2010 at 1:47 pm
That's pretty good! Dark, but good!
Serendipity-Pen replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 1:18 pm
I agree. But just because its dark, doesn't mean that it isn't amazing. Well done!
Bbrat replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 12:34 pm
wow. that was deep:) i really liked it!
Healing_Angel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 12:26 am
I can relate to this! You are strong and determined Jess. Keep fighting and when you fall, I'll catch you... I'm crying now. Somehow all your work makes me cry because it's so beautiful...  
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