Last Night MAG

By Sasha O., Cincinnati, OH

     I woke up with bags under my eyes and messed-up hair. Last night I was up too late. Last night I cried too hard. Last night I sat in the middle of the soccer field during the storm. The rain molded my hair into thick, dripping clumps and glued my clothes to my skin. Last night I made snow angels in the mud and painted my face with clay from under the bleachers.

Last night it was a year since you died.

Last night I sat where you used to sit; I cheered like you used to cheer for me. You never skipped a single game, but now you miss them all. Last night I sang Beatles songs at the top of my lungs as I ran past the ice cream shop we used to go to. Last night I went to your office building and let myself in with the hidden key you showed me. There’s somebody else’s name on your door now; I saw a different chair at the desk. They have forgotten you entirely.

Last night I skipped on the metal plates in the sidewalk and listened to the echoes, but you weren’t there to land harder and louder than me. Last night I walked past the zoo where you used to carry me on your shoulders so I could see the zebras. Last night I tried to bring you back, but all I got were bags under my eyes and lots of messed-up hair.



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i love this !

on Oct. 3 2010 at 7:54 pm
xAllegria BRONZE, Singapore, Other
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Ça fait tellement du bien d’aimer les gens qu’on aime, que ça finit par faire mal. Je sais pas comment on survit a ça. Non franchement, je sais pas. LOL (laughing out loud) ®, Lola.

I love the descriptions, but I feel the story is a bit to clichéd.

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on Oct. 3 2010 at 6:07 pm
Zzzie SILVER, North Canton, Ohio
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"Think positive, or I'll have to start singing."

You are a great writer! It seems so real, I can see someone doing this. I love how you tie in the first sentence with the last one. Keep writing! :D

on Oct. 3 2010 at 11:07 am
Writer4Life_21 SILVER, No Where, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"If you don't know where your going, you will end up someplace else." - Yogi Bera

This is a great piece. I like how you were totally honest with your feelings. Can't wait for more!

Krissy G. said...
on Feb. 6 2009 at 3:17 pm
This is an amazing piece. You took your feelings and placed them right into my heart. Can't wait for more!

on Oct. 24 2008 at 2:11 pm
OMG That's so sad! It was very well written. It's very emotional. Keep at it! :)


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