My Boyfriend Is A Vampire.

June 7, 2009
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Chapter 1 original relationship.

of course our relationship was normal. night he always leaves me
in a hurry but other than that everything
is fine. My friends arent even afraid of
him either. (like jason)

Brooke even talks to jake
no problem. i dont get the
fact of him leaving me by
11:00 every night. Its like
he is hiding something.

but other than that he loves
me. and i mean REALLY loves
me. he leaves me dark poetry
on my doorstep every morning
and walks me home. every day.

He is very inteligent.
and he calls me "my love"
all the time. He has this thing
that he does. he pretends to
be dracula. i know it is hilarious.

until i went to washington for a week that is...

brooke called me that evening
saying her neck hurt and she
was bleeding.

oh no.

no no no no no!

i didn't even want to think that
jake was what i had thought he
was at that point.

a vampire.

i told her to calm down
and tell me how deep the
cuts were and she said that
they looked like bite marks.
and then i hung up.

oh crap i did it again.

i thought my heart going
ninety miles an hour again.
I am going out with a vampire.

it all made sense now.

the dracula impression wasnt an impression
i was real.

he left me so i wouldn't get bitten.

but i know he wanted to.


it was him.

he would come for me soon
i knew it.

which meant i needed a plan
and i couldn't forget it
and i needed to stay away from
his teeth.

definitely stay away from that.

i have to tell brooke.

since i lost emily cuz of.......


but that is just because he thought
she was me of course.

we have a resemblance.


he was at the dance and he was
wearing his favorite color.


so i went up to him and told him
i just wanted to hang out with
my friends tonight. he didn't mind.

or did he?

i wasnt sure.
the expression on his
face was unreadable.

i didnt know what to do

i had no time.

at midnight i was going to
stay awake just in case he

i was wrong to thing about not
going to sleep cuz in the morning
my neck was stiff and it HURT a lot.

i put my hand up to it and it was all
wet but like thick. i took it back and my
fingers were coated with blood and my teeth
were really sharp.

i couldnt hear something.

something important. heart.

i was a vampire and jake had bit me last night.

oh my god! what am i going to do!

i was bleeding a lot. and the room still
smelt like his jacket. and also the metalic smell of fresh blood
He was here about an
hour ago i know it. cuz that is when i had a quick
dream about an alligator biting me and then my mind went blank
and i woke up.

it was one in the morning.

vampires are nocturnal.

they are awake until the sun rises.

oops....... i thought panicking.

i was going home as a vampire and i definitely didnt want to.

"crap!" i yelled and went to the bathroom to see what had happened.

the blood was coming out like water in a sink. it was so sick.

but then when i all of a sudden tightened up around my neck the wound
sealed closed.

creepy! i thought.

i touched the scars and they were burning. they hadnt
healed completely yet.

i dialed the phone.

i had to call brooke.


Chapter 2 Thirsty.
"hello?" said brooke in her confused voice, "Molly what the
heck is going on!"

"Calm down!" i yelled, "i dont know but i got........b-- hurt too.

"Tell me what is going on!" she said in a freaked out voice,
"My teeth are like in pain!"

i paused not saying anything for a short time to realize mine
were too. crap. I thought. im thirsty.

jake knew a lot about his kind he would call it "studying" vampires
when he was still trying to lie to me. He had told me that when a vampire was
thirsty there teeth would hurt.
a lot.

i swallowed hard to make the lump in my throat go away, "Brooke," i paused,
"You are........thirsty?"


"Brooke you're a vampire," i shivered at the word.


she hung up on me.

i found a bunny outside and without
control feasted on that. least im not thirsty anymore. i thought. still scared.

but suddenly i craved.........more.

i went over into the woods and found a deer. that died.

whats wrong with me!? i thought. i wasnt craving anymore.
that deer had been too much.

suddenly my cell phone the creepy ring tone.

of jake.

Chapter 3 figuring things out. (not)
"hello?" i said my voice hard and strong.

"Molly? are you okay?"

he did know. i thought he might have forgotten.

"Depends," i paused, "Did you do this to me?!" i yelled.

"Uhhh.. No?" he questioned.

"Dammit Jake!" i yelled, "Why didnt you tell me you were a vampire!"

"Molly calm down!" he yelled begging.

"Why should i!" i quavered, "You turned me into- into this freak!"

"Molly im sorry," he paused, "I had to."

"WHAT!" i yelled in fear wondering what he

"Molly if i didn't i might have just drank all of your blood," he said, "Then you would have died fast."

I quickly snapped the phone shut.

i had to think.


I ran into the house to get paper and a pen.

I wrote:

Dear Mom and Dad,
I have to leave. For now.
You don't want to know what
happened. I'll take MY car of course.
I'll meet you back in Wyoming soon.

A tear splatted on the paper.

i was crying.
just then i heard breathing behind me.


Chapter 4 Jason.
Behind him was none other than the
devil himself.


Let me explain quickly.
we never worked it out.
just last week he tried
to kill brooke.

he still hated me and he wasn't

the note was a set up.

"Molly you arent a vampire." Jake said.

"But the bite marks?" i stuttered a bit.


"The fast healing?" i asked.

"I did that." he smiled.

"Molly you are NOT a vampire," Jason said finally speaking, "Yet."

Jason walked up to me and i didnt move.
that would be a mistake.

He brushed his hand on the scar across my cheek.

he smiled.

I shivered. He was a vampire too.

His teeth were sharp and long and
that scared me.

He saw my scared expression and
smiled again.

great. i thought quickly.

im gonna die.

they lunged at me and i took a
scissors that were nicely out on
the counter and aimed it at them.

they froze.

"You have until four in the morning Molly," said Jason.

and they left.

Chapter 5. Thinking. The battle was near.
i didnt know what to do.
i was lost in my thoughts.
very lost.

I called brooke.

she didnt answer.

I got in the car and raced to wyoming.

it was three in the morning when i got there.

crap. i thought.

i sat there waiting for them to spring out early.

then i saw something in the shadows. by the woods.

(to be continued.)

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thepreechyteenager said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 9:14 am
Good story line but I think it gets kinda confusing at times and you have to re-read the last couple lines- which sorta messed up your whole mood/atmosphere thing you had going on.
Geez, you joined & wrote this the summer before 6th grade?! Whenever I try to set up an account the teenink services always tells me i'm not eligable! ugh- im a fail whale.
whatev- overall pretty good story line, like what some people said you might try to touch up the grammar, but I totally like... (more »)
~*)Wish(*~ replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 3:25 pm
thanks so much! :)
vampiresrock said...
Jan. 4, 2010 at 12:45 pm
niiiiiiceeee! Very cool!
~*HopelesslyCrushed*~ replied...
Jan. 4, 2010 at 6:07 pm
thanks! :)
Ariesangel replied...
Jan. 4, 2010 at 6:20 pm
every thing is really good, but u seriously need to work on grammer. once u said them when only Jason was attacking molly.
~*HopelesslyCrushed*~ replied...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 5:17 pm
you need to work on saying things nicely. *She said sweetly* i wrote this during the summer i was going into sixth grade. that's when i joined. my recent writing is better.
~*HopelesslyCrushed*~ replied...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 5:19 pm
actually no. they both lunged at her. read carefully please.
dragonfan said...
Dec. 1, 2009 at 4:23 pm
this is sooo cool!!!!!!!!! i love it cant wait 2 read more!
~*el-oh-vee-ee*~ replied...
Dec. 2, 2009 at 4:06 pm
thanks... umm... i think i have it posted.. somewhere.... lol.
. said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 3:08 pm
oooo this is really good. What's next? ]
His-Bright-Green-Eyes... said...
Jul. 29, 2009 at 5:58 pm
this is the first 5 chapters. :)
KonyaB!!! This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 6:32 pm
Everything is pretty good, you have alot of grammar errors though...
I like the way you wrote it in free verse, not a lot of authors write it like that. :)
banana123 replied...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 3:25 pm
yeah...seriously work on ur grammar n stuff!!!!!!!
eveythin other wise is pretty good!!!!!!
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