kill me sensuasly

January 24, 2009
By michaeljacksonlover SILVER, St.Louis, Missouri
michaeljacksonlover SILVER, St.Louis, Missouri
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Hot tears stung my eyes as the limp figure lie there,dead. I Didn't know this person, she had my mothers appearance, but its not her. Her smile once warm and loving now cold as ice. Her body lie uncanged as they closed the crystal coffin and gentaly placed it on the black leather seats of the hurse. We pulled into the poorly lit cemetary, stopping near a group of older adults, faces grim and souls blackened. I stepped out on the damp grass, walking over to join the group.


The author's comments:
this is a start of my newest book. it came to me one day after we drove past a cemetary, where they were having a funeral. I hope you enjoy it and make sure to check out part 1 of my non fiction book A true story: part 1

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on Jan. 10 2010 at 7:08 pm
michaeljacksonlover SILVER, St.Louis, Missouri
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yea...as with all the rest ive submitted more parts to this one too

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on Jan. 10 2010 at 6:54 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

This has great potential, but that's all it is right now: potential. If you develope the story more fully then let me know and I would love to read it.


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