continuation to vampire kisses

May 4, 2009
By jazzyt95 SILVER, Ozone Park, New York
jazzyt95 SILVER, Ozone Park, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"i want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into" quote by Alexander Sterling


I woke up in my bed, but how can this be I fell asleep at Alexanders house. My beautiful black kitten slept peacefully at my feet. I slowly slipped out of bed without waking up nightmare. I ran down stairs in my hello batty pajamas . I found nerd boy trying to hide my count chocula cereal from me . He is so immature, does he think im stupid. I know every hiding spot he uses. I tiptoed over to him and set my hand on his shoulder.
“Ahh hah” the look on his face made me want to fall to the floor and laugh. I scared him so bad his face turned as pale as a vampire !
“Ahhh , raven don’t scare me like that”
“GIVE ME MY CEREAL NOW ”
“Fine heres your freak food , I did not want it anyway”
“good”
“remind me to ask Alexander what he likes about you , because I don’t understand. He is so cool and your not”
“keep away from my boyfriend , nerd boy.”
“Ok , fine”
He ran up the stairs and made his arrival noticed by slamming the door . The loud bang woke up nightmare . So I ran up the stairs with her food and found her looking out my window . After she finished, I slipped on my vampire bat tank top and my black velvet skirt with black and gray leggings and my combat boots. I quickly put on my black lipstick and ran over to Alexanders house . Sure I was early but I had to see him.
The door was already unlocked , so I ran up to his bed room (or coffin room) . He was sleeping very peacefully. I was slowly walking toward him and suddenly I tripped on a loose floor board and right before I hit the floor Alexander caught me . He was in his black under shirt and boxers . His hair was all messed up.
“You could have given a little warning” he said with a wink
“Sorry , I was a little impatient. I should have ca----”he interrupted me with a kiss hello .
“So how has your morning”
“like always, fought with my brother and played with nightmare”
he kissed me once more.
“How fun”he said with a mocking giggle.
“So what do we have planned for today, anything adventurous”
“I just wanted to stop by the grave yard, just to make sure everything is safe for you and then we can have a picnic” why does every thing have to be safe , even being to safe is a bad thing.
TO BE CONTINUED!!!


The author's comments:
i love vampires and ellen schriber inspired me

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lizzy1002 GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2011 at 6:38 pm
lizzy1002 GOLD, Palm Bay, Florida
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" I rather die for somthing then live for nothing"-Unknown

jazzyt95 is my cuz and she has Talent .....cheack out my work to

on Aug. 17 2010 at 12:41 pm
NikitaBliss PLATINUM, Galion, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
The more you wait, the more it sucks.

 want more... :) write more, i for one absolutely love it!

on Feb. 25 2010 at 4:58 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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What smiley said... this definitely has potential.

on Feb. 24 2010 at 9:58 pm
KanenRenoir SILVER, Caldwell, Texas
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Cool, this is interesting. There are a lot of gramical errors, but I think it has potential. I want to read more.

on Feb. 24 2010 at 9:14 pm
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Stupid Is As Stupid Does." -Forest Gump (;
"No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude."

Mmm... I think it has potential. When you're using quotes capitalize it, that way it looks more put together. Also, when you're asking questions make sure you put the right punctuation, that goes for a lot of parts in your story where you should add commas here and there. Keep it up.

on Feb. 1 2010 at 4:20 pm
SmileyFace94 SILVER, Queens, New York
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this is good! i can't wait to see what happens next...


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